One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, this is a great one-line poem, and a poem of truth. Sooner or later, the truth does have a way of unravelling itself. As far a gossip, karma has a way of taking care of the gossiper. Great photo choice.
Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Hi Gypsy, this is a great one-line poem, and a poem of truth. Sooner or later, the truth does have a way of unravelling itself. As far a gossip, karma has a way of taking care of the gossiper. Great photo choice.
Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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I believe in karma.
Margaret
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
I remember misconstrued truth/gossip back in my school days, it brought much harm, and relegated some ashamed and lonely, some say a form of friendship that never binds, what a story you have put in so few words, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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I remember misconstrued truth/gossip back in my school days, it brought much harm, and relegated some ashamed and lonely, some say a form of friendship that never binds, what a story you have put in so few words, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Gossip is never good. And yes, eventually the truth will come out. Thank you for sharing this short but important poem with us. Once again you have shared a good presentation with us.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Gossip is never good. And yes, eventually the truth will come out. Thank you for sharing this short but important poem with us. Once again you have shared a good presentation with us.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Barbara, you are very kind and I appreciate you. Have a lovely weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your one line poem- Challenging- excellent picture presentation- the point is easily understood- an experience most everyone has had at some time in their life - the satori describes the ultimate ending for such folly- good job AP
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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I like your one line poem- Challenging- excellent picture presentation- the point is easily understood- an experience most everyone has had at some time in their life - the satori describes the ultimate ending for such folly- good job AP
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you, AP. (*÷*)
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Comment from lyenochka
This is a perfect one-liner! You used metaphor with the string of gossip and the unraveling of the truth. So much of gossip and conspiracies lead to the destruction of truth. I think this is a winner!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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This is a perfect one-liner! You used metaphor with the string of gossip and the unraveling of the truth. So much of gossip and conspiracies lead to the destruction of truth. I think this is a winner!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you! it means a lot coming from you. Love and hugs, big sister.
Have a wonderful weekend!
MariVal
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💖💖You, too!
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your one-line poem. It was a great sentiment expressed in just one line, which was impressive. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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I enjoyed your one-line poem. It was a great sentiment expressed in just one line, which was impressive. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Jessi. (*÷*)
Gypsy hugs