Not my Favorite Time of Year
I speak for all cats we don't like clothes.3 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good poem entry to Christmas Cat Poem contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. I like it is told from the cat's perspective. I liked that you used Christmas colors in your poem. The poem could be expanded so the poem doesn't look squeezed into the box. Drop the first line down one space. Go to the last word in the poem and hit enter once or twice. Then your poem box is larger. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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This is a good poem entry to Christmas Cat Poem contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. I like it is told from the cat's perspective. I liked that you used Christmas colors in your poem. The poem could be expanded so the poem doesn't look squeezed into the box. Drop the first line down one space. Go to the last word in the poem and hit enter once or twice. Then your poem box is larger. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the suggestions. I will use on my next entry. This one is done. Thanks for the read and review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
This was a fun poem about a cat at Christmas time. I don't dress up my dogs or stamp their feet in a card, but I guarantee they'd hate it as much as your cat does. LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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This was a fun poem about a cat at Christmas time. I don't dress up my dogs or stamp their feet in a card, but I guarantee they'd hate it as much as your cat does. LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thanks for the read and the feeback. Happy New Year.
Comment from Celyn
This is an amusing poem but not for the cat (or dog). I like the rhyming in this poem and the idea behind it is great. The rhythm is a bit odd in places so that it does not always read smoothly but that is a minor point.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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This is an amusing poem but not for the cat (or dog). I like the rhyming in this poem and the idea behind it is great. The rhythm is a bit odd in places so that it does not always read smoothly but that is a minor point.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thanks for the read, I will work on your point about not as smooth.
