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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Just beautiful both the artwork and words. Today is a rainy day, so this is so welcome to see and read on a dreary day
Thank you
Best wishes and regards
Mary

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
    Thank you, Mary, I always appreciate your kind and generous reviews and feedback. Have a lovely night.

    Gypsy Word Weaver
    Art is the language of the soul
Comment from BOO ghost
Exceptional
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Woohoo! Looks incredible and tangible! Love the title name! Bravo Perfecto! The colorful words melt together.

The song, ' You Are My Sunshine,' comes to mind.

Awe, love your words Sunny Side up! You got your thinking cap donned on. This one is a real beauty! The author notes are greatly appreciated! BOO finally posted something but it's too late in the season to catch up. Won't win anyways. Been gone too many years. I know how Fanstory works. Lost a ton of fans being AWAL.

Count your doubloon!

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
    I reviewed your story about the bb gun and pigeon from hell LOL I hope you win.

    Thank you for the exceptional review and six stars! You are very kind.

    gypsy word weaver
    art is the language of the soul
reply by BOO ghost on 15-Nov-2022
    Awe, I know I won't win. I been gone for years. I got bored so I posted something. Lot of my fans vanished for whatever reason. I won't be posting much until January. I'm too far behind. Thanks anyways! Gypsy Queen.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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From the beautiful artwork, through the beautifully written poem, with the perfect-colored font, to the ending artwork the poem is a masterpiece. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
    Thank you, my friend, you are a wonderful reviewer. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy Word Weaver
    Art is the language of the soul
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, I love this little poem. I can see the whole scene. I especially liked: sunny side up - great satori line. Beautiful presentation.
tangerine dusk is such a great descriptive phrase. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile. Margaret ~ LateBloomer

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
    Thank you, Margaret. I always appreciate your excellent reviews. (*-*) hugs

    Gypsy Word Weaver
    Art is the language of the soul
Comment from lyenochka
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Lovely presentation and poem. Enjoyed the "sunny side up" even as the sun is setting, it gives bright colors of tangerine as it "melts into warm red rocks." You make dusk feel like dawn!

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
    I wanted to describe the last warmth of the sun on the rocks before the sun sets. Thank you for your continuous support and kind reviews. Love you.

    MariVal (*=*)
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

You composed a very nice verse for your ekphrastic poem. I take my eggs either way, but with the sunrise I think it is sunny side up. Maybe with dusk, it is over easy.

Mark

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
    I wanted to describe the last warmth of the sun on the rocks before the sun sets. The sun looks the same at dusk or dawn. It's similar to an egg yolk.

    Thank you, Mark. I appreciate the time you took to read and review my poem.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

So very mellow and beauteous haiku,
Gypsy Blue Rose. The lovely
photograph takes the reader
into an earthly paradise.
The setting sun reminded me
of melting butter. Many
blessings to you. All the best.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
    Thank you, my friend, you are a wonderful reviewer. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Thank you for the six stars! such a treat.

    Gypsy Word Weaver
    Art is the language of the soul
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
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Love this one. So much meaning in so few words. Amazing. The illustration is beautiful. Always so true of your writings. Enjoyed. Thank you for sharing.
Write On

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
    Ms Barbara, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy
    Word Weaver
reply by Barbara Peabody Pouliot on 14-Nov-2022
    Please read some of mine, if you have time. I need a word weaver?s opinion. Especially
    The Lotus, I wrote it for all my friends her.
reply by Barbara Peabody Pouliot on 15-Nov-2022
    Please check out the new one that I am releasing tomorrow, on my B day.
    I did not enter a contest. But I think you might enjoy, I hope
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
    I did enjoy it. It's beautiful.
reply by Barbara Peabody Pouliot on 15-Nov-2022
    Tomorrow is my new, best release, I hope it is enjoyed
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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Love it! This is a beautifully stated poem. You really have a gift at explaining the things we see in nature daily in a special way. I love your writing and your presentation. This poem's descriptions are perfectly stated in words and images.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
    Ms Sandy, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy
    Word Weaver
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 14-Nov-2022
    Word weaver describes you perfectly. You are always welcome.