One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Heather Knight
I'm sorry, but I ran out of extra stars on Monday! This definitely deserves a a yellow one.
I'm not usually into horror, but I loved your perspective.
Besides, I've always being intrigued by haiburn ever since I saw it for the first time.
Thanks for sharing your poems and the educational notes.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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I'm sorry, but I ran out of extra stars on Monday! This definitely deserves a a yellow one.
I'm not usually into horror, but I loved your perspective.
Besides, I've always being intrigued by haiburn ever since I saw it for the first time.
Thanks for sharing your poems and the educational notes.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Heather, you are very kind. I appreciate your excellent review and feedback. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt."
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My daughter would love your chocolate quote. I'm going to share it with her.x
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine tale from the crypt, Gypsy, one to make Dean proud. I once though a demon had crawled into be with me, but I'd been drinking heavily and it turned out to be my wife. I've since come to realize I wasn't wrong!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Another fine tale from the crypt, Gypsy, one to make Dean proud. I once though a demon had crawled into be with me, but I'd been drinking heavily and it turned out to be my wife. I've since come to realize I wasn't wrong!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Hahaha... exes can be pretty scary. LoL
Thank you for the excellent review and kind words. I appreciate your valuable time. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt."
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your Hailbun caused me to smile. I know a strange response, but I actually have had this happen to me. It was my large tabby, Monty, tugging at the blankets. LOL Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.
couldn't turn my head but I felt his weight on the mattress as he lay next to me (he lay beside me... Now, I am wondering about this, beside is to be used with humans, next to with objects, does a demon count as a human or object? I'm not sure.)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Your Hailbun caused me to smile. I know a strange response, but I actually have had this happen to me. It was my large tabby, Monty, tugging at the blankets. LOL Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.
couldn't turn my head but I felt his weight on the mattress as he lay next to me (he lay beside me... Now, I am wondering about this, beside is to be used with humans, next to with objects, does a demon count as a human or object? I'm not sure.)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the excellent review and helpful feedback. I corrected my error. I always welcome help with my grammar. Have a wonderful day, Barbara.
Gypsy
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt."
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Haibun poem- good picture presentations- good flow- definitely sounds like a nightmare of a dream- read a dream interpretation- would be interesting?- excellent notes/ thank you- flower grows in Sumatra- also coffee- wonder if corpse flower soil makes for good coffee? Lol good job - pleasant dreams tonight-
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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I like your Haibun poem- good picture presentations- good flow- definitely sounds like a nightmare of a dream- read a dream interpretation- would be interesting?- excellent notes/ thank you- flower grows in Sumatra- also coffee- wonder if corpse flower soil makes for good coffee? Lol good job - pleasant dreams tonight-
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Ap, thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, it wouldn't be Halloween if I didn't think of Dean. I just thought of him earlier this week. It seems unreal that he is gone. Your poem is filled with vivid imagery. Dean suffered from bad dreams too. Perhaps, he was trying to talk to you. Well chosen photos. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Hi Gypsy, it wouldn't be Halloween if I didn't think of Dean. I just thought of him earlier this week. It seems unreal that he is gone. Your poem is filled with vivid imagery. Dean suffered from bad dreams too. Perhaps, he was trying to talk to you. Well chosen photos. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Holy cow, I hope it wasn't Dean, we loved eachother. I always think of Dean when I write horror. We had a couple of books of horror haiku, one is published and the other was unfinished when he died. Unfortunately, we both got very sick towards the end and we grew apart. I know how much he loved Halloween. It's nice that so many people loved him in fanstory... it was his favorite thing to do. :)
Thank you very much, Margaret. I always look forward to your kind reviews.
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Dean would only visit you in a good way. Remember, it's Halloween, scary creepy things happen. Xo. M
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
To be near a nightmare is worse than dreaming of a nightmare. When Halloween arrives, some of the masks are so frightening, that you wonder if the devil is actually disguised.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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To be near a nightmare is worse than dreaming of a nightmare. When Halloween arrives, some of the masks are so frightening, that you wonder if the devil is actually disguised.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
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Comment from royowen
I think if Dean were alive he would appreciate it. That nightmare must have been so awful. I haven't had a dream that could begin to rival that one, this is so beautifully written friend Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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I think if Dean were alive he would appreciate it. That nightmare must have been so awful. I haven't had a dream that could begin to rival that one, this is so beautifully written friend Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review, Roy. Blessings and hugs
Gypsy
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Most welcome