Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I like the analogy of dancing water, Gypsy. You have done a fine job with this very short verse and we all can imagine the acorns causing the rippling circles of water. I enjoyed reading it!!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022

Thank you very much for your time and kind review, Melissa. It's always good to hear from you.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

A colorful Haiku you have painted for today's post ! Your contrasting colors nicely match your selected artwork for a good overall impression.

Mark

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022

Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this complete package with us. Yes, the artwork, the color choices and the beautifully written poem all work together to give a great reading experience.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022

Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your exceptional review. Have a lovely day, my friend.

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I liked the personification of the acorns diving in head first which is a great description. With the harvest moon shining in the lake with the falling acorns, you present a great autumn scene!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022

Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate your exceptional review. Have a lovely day. Love you.

Marival ❤️

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Exceptional

This is so interesting. I like the Satori. It's so playful. The presentation is great. You used three different colors and they are all colors of harvesting.

Excellent.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022

Lisa,

Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Haiku poem- Gypsy- nice picture presentation- good word count and connection between lines- poem has good flow- acorns diving in head first -clever- good job

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022

AP

Thank you, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. You are very kind.

Gypsy

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, this poem is great. It is filled with wonderful Autumn imagery.

I especially liked:
harvest moon
dances across indigo lake --

(Great visual. I can see it.)

Beautiful presentation. My grandchildren were visiting during the harvest moon. They were so enthralled. They followed the moon all the way home through the car's moon roof. My granddaughter, almost age 3, keeps asking me about the moon--just sharing. I'm going to make a moon lover out of these grandchildren yet.

A timely poem. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022

Dear Margaret,

It's fun to pass traditions down to our children and grandchildren.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I particularly like the last line, I could imagine a number of acorn nuts lining up to drown themselves but discovering that they were way too buoyant, beautifully written my friend, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022

Roy,

Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy

reply by royowen on 26-Sep-2022

Most welcome

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

Beautifully stated and written. The black background is your perfect canvas. The second smaller visual is your cherry on the sundae of your presentation. Another good one, Ms. Gypsy.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022

Thank you very much, Ms Sandy. I appreciate your kind words and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs