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Comment from Alexander Pearce
Exceptional
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Lovely haiku, thanks for sharing. As a stargazer, I had a lovely image (and a little jealousy) spring to mind at the thought of clear skies at night.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and exceptional six stars review. Also for the helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
Comment from Marienkiefer
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A lovely poem, Gypsy. I enjoyed reading.

Sparkling in your poem:
-theme and presentation
-subject on the Canary Islands. Thanks for the informative author notes

Overall beauty in the sentiment and expression in this poem.
Very nicely done.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much, Marien. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy
reply by Marienkiefer on 25-Sep-2022
    You are very welcome🌸
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with good alliteration. Of special note:

stargazing at Mount Teide,
(Awesome, indeed)

Beautiful photo and presentation. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much, Margaret. I hope you are having a great weekend.

    Gypsy
    "Not all of us can do great things. But we can do small things with great love." - Mother Teresa


Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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I'd never heard of World Heritage Sites before your article. I did a little research and discovered they are all over the place, many in the United States. In fact, I didn't know it when I was there, but I have been to several World Heritage Sites. Thanks for this very informative verse.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
Comment from harmony13
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line say it all! I pondered on the beauty the author describes! Thank you for the author's notes - it is always great to know the history! The artwork is
stunning and compliments this poem!
Gypsy, have a great weekend!.....Maria

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
    Hello, Maria, thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is a beautiful poem to go with a beautiful picture. Thank you for that information about the Easter Islands. I can't see the Milky Way as well here in our forest by the lake as it shows in your picture. It does leave me awestruck

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy Queen
    "A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
Comment from royowen
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Although I know we can't visit everywhere on earth, it's a place I'd like to go, my cousin visits there most years. This is beautifully written, I love it, stargazing is the wonder God provides, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
    Roy,

    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy Queen
    "A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
reply by royowen on 23-Sep-2022
    Well done
Comment from karenina
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I am so far behind if I wait another day I'll be ahead! (smile)

Gazing at the night sky and searching for "falling stars" is one of my favorite activities. This modern haiku and images capture the majesty of it all.

Lovely post. I'm sorry I'm tardy in reviewing so much of your poetry! You'll get sick of hearing from me now...

Karenina

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
    Karenina,

    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Love you ❤️

    Gypsy Queen
    "A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
reply by karenina on 23-Sep-2022
    How sweet are you? Honestly, Gypsy, I hit you with way too many reviews at one time! One "Thanks" would have sufficed! :)
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your modern haiku poem - excellent picture presentation!! Goods syllable count and flow. Notes are excellent - giving information to support the poem - darkest place on earth - very interesting - also information about the the Canary Islands - good job

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy Queen
    "A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this poem and the beautiful photographs with us. I enjoy stargazing myself. In West Texas there's McDonald Observatory. My husband and I have taken the star gazing tour. We are planning our next trip.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
    Barbara,

    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy Queen
    "A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown