One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from karenina
May I borrow your MUSE GPS? Mine was last seen hitchhiking somewhere along the Canadian border! I'm encountering every road block my mind can throw up. Good news? I'm finally getting to review---a LOT!
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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May I borrow your MUSE GPS? Mine was last seen hitchhiking somewhere along the Canadian border! I'm encountering every road block my mind can throw up. Good news? I'm finally getting to review---a LOT!
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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LoL, yes sister, you can use my mouse's GPS
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Queen
"A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden." -author unknown
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Does your mouse bring you to your muse?
Why didn't I think of that????
Laughing.....
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LoL that was a typo but I can pretend it's a metaphore... haha
Comment from aryr
I really liked the picture of the wind sweep grain, Gypsy. Your words were so relaxed they made me relax as well. I really appreciated that you mentioned following your muse and no road blocks. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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I really liked the picture of the wind sweep grain, Gypsy. Your words were so relaxed they made me relax as well. I really appreciated that you mentioned following your muse and no road blocks. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review, my friend.
Gypsy
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh the freedom of mental roadblocks. What a wonderful thought! Thank you for sharing this Haiku with us. It makes us feel free as we read. You've done a great job with this poem.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Oh the freedom of mental roadblocks. What a wonderful thought! Thank you for sharing this Haiku with us. It makes us feel free as we read. You've done a great job with this poem.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku- good picture presentation- good word count and connection between lines- writing- stilling the mind and allowing the subconscious to speak to you in the language of poetry- good job
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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I like your haiku- good picture presentation- good word count and connection between lines- writing- stilling the mind and allowing the subconscious to speak to you in the language of poetry- good job
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Just let it float. Wherever and whatever. Roadblocks would be mental blocks and external interruptions, get them out of here. Good one Gypsy. So that's how it's done.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Just let it float. Wherever and whatever. Roadblocks would be mental blocks and external interruptions, get them out of here. Good one Gypsy. So that's how it's done.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
sounds just how I like it... a go-with-the-flow. And really, resistance is a futile action, so why not let the breeze float us to where we feel settled?
A beautiful thought, a magic intent and as always... a perfect presentation.
How you use your words so cleverly within such a limited format is a true testament to how your skill forms your art.
Amor, respeto, besitos y abrazos,
Reina Gitana.
With our thoughts we create...
the flow of our mind.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
sounds just how I like it... a go-with-the-flow. And really, resistance is a futile action, so why not let the breeze float us to where we feel settled?
A beautiful thought, a magic intent and as always... a perfect presentation.
How you use your words so cleverly within such a limited format is a true testament to how your skill forms your art.
Amor, respeto, besitos y abrazos,
Reina Gitana.
With our thoughts we create...
the flow of our mind.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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James, thank you very much for your beautiful and kind review.
besitos y abrazos
Gypsy Queen
ps, I sent rest of response via private message
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, I like this. I wish my muse would take me on an adventure.
Good haiku format and sensory appeal. I especially liked:
I glide where my muse takes me
(G, the above line makes me feel as if I were a bird or floating in an air balloon.)
Beautiful presentation. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Hi Gypsy, I like this. I wish my muse would take me on an adventure.
Good haiku format and sensory appeal. I especially liked:
I glide where my muse takes me
(G, the above line makes me feel as if I were a bird or floating in an air balloon.)
Beautiful presentation. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Margaret, thank you very much for your kind and insightful review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
It's good the the muse can avoid "road blocks" as spring break times are full of road blocks. I hope you won't have any problems with traffic in your travels. Hugs!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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It's good the the muse can avoid "road blocks" as spring break times are full of road blocks. I hope you won't have any problems with traffic in your travels. Hugs!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind feedback.
besitos y abrazos,
marival
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your poems are always so compelling, I love reading them. The artwork is especially beautiful with this writing. I do enjoy your poetry and watch for it on this site. I look forward to your next masterpiece.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Your poems are always so compelling, I love reading them. The artwork is especially beautiful with this writing. I do enjoy your poetry and watch for it on this site. I look forward to your next masterpiece.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. You are very kind.
gypsy hugs