One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
Interesting form of poetry- has a good flow and sings a kind of lullaby to a child - sorry to hear your Mother passed when you were so young- a time when you needed her so much- prayers for your sister!! Bless
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Interesting form of poetry- has a good flow and sings a kind of lullaby to a child - sorry to hear your Mother passed when you were so young- a time when you needed her so much- prayers for your sister!! Bless
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
Far away, howls a wild wolf... una Reina Lobo Gitana.
How truly beautiful.
These words linger on the page as I feel the pain of distance being carried not only through the wind by the currents of the tide.
Memories and energy of those close by come to play when they know you are in pain and needing comfort.
Mi amor y oraciones Mina.
Amor, respeto, besitos y abrazos, mi querida Amiga,
Reina Gitana.
With our thoughts we create...
sweet surrender.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
Far away, howls a wild wolf... una Reina Lobo Gitana.
How truly beautiful.
These words linger on the page as I feel the pain of distance being carried not only through the wind by the currents of the tide.
Memories and energy of those close by come to play when they know you are in pain and needing comfort.
Mi amor y oraciones Mina.
Amor, respeto, besitos y abrazos, mi querida Amiga,
Reina Gitana.
With our thoughts we create...
sweet surrender.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Lord James,
As always, a really appreciate your kind and insightful review. Your six stars are celestial jewels I am very grateful for the exceptional gift.
May you have a wonderful weekend.
Besitos y abrazos!!!
Gypsy Queen
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Gypsy, your poem is so soft and dreamy and filled with vivid imagery. I especially liked:
Stars are out for you tonight
and the moon lulls you to sleep
(I'd be a rich woman if I could own the moon and stars. I guess I'll have to settle that they are showing off and softly strutting their stuff for me.)
Well chosen photo. A pleasure to read. I am so sorry that you sister is still ill. I will pray for her and your family. When the FS family prays, miracles happen. Xo. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Hello Gypsy, your poem is so soft and dreamy and filled with vivid imagery. I especially liked:
Stars are out for you tonight
and the moon lulls you to sleep
(I'd be a rich woman if I could own the moon and stars. I guess I'll have to settle that they are showing off and softly strutting their stuff for me.)
Well chosen photo. A pleasure to read. I am so sorry that you sister is still ill. I will pray for her and your family. When the FS family prays, miracles happen. Xo. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Margaret, Thank you very much for the exceptional review.
Gypsy
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A ethereal sounding poem. The metaphors are charming. The flow is good. The repetition in the last line of each stanza is a lulling beat. I am now ready for a nap. The presentation is beautiful.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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A ethereal sounding poem. The metaphors are charming. The flow is good. The repetition in the last line of each stanza is a lulling beat. I am now ready for a nap. The presentation is beautiful.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. You are very kind.
gypsy hugs
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You are welcome, it was a joy.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your lullaby would be comforting for any child to hear,
Gypsy. I enjoyed reading it. Your work was beautifully
presented. The image was awesome and the color scheme's
perfect. I will keep your sister in my prayers.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Your lullaby would be comforting for any child to hear,
Gypsy. I enjoyed reading it. Your work was beautifully
presented. The image was awesome and the color scheme's
perfect. I will keep your sister in my prayers.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. You are very kind.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. Amazing presentation. I love your colour choice blue on black. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Hope your sister gets well soon.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem. Amazing presentation. I love your colour choice blue on black. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Hope your sister gets well soon.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
To lose your Mother at such a young age must have been a devastating blow and I am so sorry for your loss. Your words are calm and soothing and I hope your sister gets well soon, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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To lose your Mother at such a young age must have been a devastating blow and I am so sorry for your loss. Your words are calm and soothing and I hope your sister gets well soon, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you, dolly, I appreciate your kind words. Hugs
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
The pictures were beautiful, Gypsy. Your words were delightful, they showed that one can always enjoy a lullaby and love. How sad that your mother passed when you were ten. Of course, I will as will my circle of friends pray for Mina, your sister. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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The pictures were beautiful, Gypsy. Your words were delightful, they showed that one can always enjoy a lullaby and love. How sad that your mother passed when you were ten. Of course, I will as will my circle of friends pray for Mina, your sister. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I appreciate your kind review. Blessed be n hugs!
gypsy
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I think you have just created a brand-new lullaby, Gypsy. This is so soothing and relaxing I almost fell asleep reading it. Just kidding, but it is very nicely spoken and easy words to lull any sleepy child to sleep. Not a single SPAG of any kind either. Very nice read.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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I think you have just created a brand-new lullaby, Gypsy. This is so soothing and relaxing I almost fell asleep reading it. Just kidding, but it is very nicely spoken and easy words to lull any sleepy child to sleep. Not a single SPAG of any kind either. Very nice read.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for for your kind review and feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and sorry to hear about your sister---sending her wishes for a speedy recovery. Cool picture----would make a nice album cover
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and sorry to hear about your sister---sending her wishes for a speedy recovery. Cool picture----would make a nice album cover
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Yes, i like the picture too. Thank you very much for for your kind review and feedback.
Gypsy
