Being Neighborly?
The folks next door are...8 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Zombies are one of my favorite horror genres. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Yours is my favorite you get my vote.
Good luck in the contest,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
Good entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Zombies are one of my favorite horror genres. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Yours is my favorite you get my vote.
Good luck in the contest,
Gypsy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thank you for this nice review and your vote...I always appreciate it. :)
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Having us for dinner? In the case of zombie neighbors, I don't know just how thoughtful the invite really is. You just may be the dinner. I think I would hesitate on my RSVP.
Yes, very thoughtful...
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
Having us for dinner? In the case of zombie neighbors, I don't know just how thoughtful the invite really is. You just may be the dinner. I think I would hesitate on my RSVP.
Yes, very thoughtful...
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Exactly! The first movie I ever saw at a drive-in theater was Night of the living dead! Then my sadistic sister thought it would be funny to drive home through a cemetery. I never forgave her for that. Anyway, thanks for this great review. :)
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A CEMETERY!?! Now that was just plain evil!!! Even I wouldn't want to go through a cemetery, at night, after Night of the Living Dead, and I'm an old timer.
Shame on her.
Comment from jaded831
Very imaginative, today we never know what to expect when invited to dinner. The days of peaceful and sanity are gone. We need to be extra careful out in the world today. Great Zombie 5-7-5, good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
Very imaginative, today we never know what to expect when invited to dinner. The days of peaceful and sanity are gone. We need to be extra careful out in the world today. Great Zombie 5-7-5, good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thanks for this great review and for taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Fleedleflump
Lol, nice approach, borrowing a joke from Hannibal Lecter and applying it to zombies - perfect approach for the prompt, and exactly the funapproach I was hoping to achieve.
Mike
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
Lol, nice approach, borrowing a joke from Hannibal Lecter and applying it to zombies - perfect approach for the prompt, and exactly the funapproach I was hoping to achieve.
Mike
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, it's really the first thing I think of when I hear the word zombie... brains! I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, it's really the first thing I think of when I hear the word zombie... brains! I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Raul1
I found this poem very funny with a dark humor. It is hilarious in how they are having humans for dinner. Gosh, those zombies! Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
I found this poem very funny with a dark humor. It is hilarious in how they are having humans for dinner. Gosh, those zombies! Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thanks Raul for this great review. I always enjoy your work, you're becoming a wonderful writer. :)
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You're welcome! Thank you, your compliment means so much to me! you have made my day! God bless you!
Comment from jessizero
Your zombie poem was very humorous. It made me laugh out loud! That last line was unexpected. Thank you so much for sharing your 5-7-5 poem here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
Your zombie poem was very humorous. It made me laugh out loud! That last line was unexpected. Thank you so much for sharing your 5-7-5 poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Hahaha.. thank you. It's always nice to hear from you. :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good Zombie 5-7-5 poem. The visual fits perfectly. I like the text centered on the large visual. I like the text being large enough to be easily read. Good luck in the contest. You have a good entry.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
This is a good Zombie 5-7-5 poem. The visual fits perfectly. I like the text centered on the large visual. I like the text being large enough to be easily read. Good luck in the contest. You have a good entry.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thank you, it's really nice to hear from you and I appreciate this great review. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
The poem meets the requirements. The flow is good. The humor slightly dark. The picture fits, but is disturbing. The idea of zombies actually breeding is the other side of eerie. Nice presentation.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
The poem meets the requirements. The flow is good. The humor slightly dark. The picture fits, but is disturbing. The idea of zombies actually breeding is the other side of eerie. Nice presentation.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Hahaha...thank you! Honestly, I can't even watch zombie movies, they're too scary. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
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You are welcome.