One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- the presentation is very pretty- interesting type of poetry- tells an interesting story- reaction to a divorce for various reasons - not sure of the symbolism- planting hanging flowers- good job
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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I like your poem- the presentation is very pretty- interesting type of poetry- tells an interesting story- reaction to a divorce for various reasons - not sure of the symbolism- planting hanging flowers- good job
Comment Written 19-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from Ulla
Oh, I liked this, Marival, a form I've never come across before. But then again, I haven't paid too much attention either. I really liked it. I think I will join the club. Ulla :)))
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Oh, I liked this, Marival, a form I've never come across before. But then again, I haven't paid too much attention either. I really liked it. I think I will join the club. Ulla :)))
Comment Written 19-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Hola,
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Your words and presentation are beautiful in imagery and sadness.
In committing suicide, one has lost all hope. How important we now recognize the need to reach out to those needing support that we have a hotline.
Best regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Your words and presentation are beautiful in imagery and sadness.
In committing suicide, one has lost all hope. How important we now recognize the need to reach out to those needing support that we have a hotline.
Best regards,
Mary
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
This is such a sad poem. You paint this atmosphere well with your beautiful words. How apt it is that you use chrysanthemums symbolic of grief), to symbolize the grief one feels after a failure and breakup. (He needs som daffodils for hope).
Wonderful work,
Gypsy,
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Gypsy,
This is such a sad poem. You paint this atmosphere well with your beautiful words. How apt it is that you use chrysanthemums symbolic of grief), to symbolize the grief one feels after a failure and breakup. (He needs som daffodils for hope).
Wonderful work,
Gypsy,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
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You?re welcome, Gypsy
Comment from aryr
Your words were inspirational, giving that it was a poem about suicide, Gypsy. All it took were words about planting the crimson ivy and white mums. I understand that white mums is in Japan a recognition of grief. Perhaps it should also show the reality of the situation. Very well done, sadly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Your words were inspirational, giving that it was a poem about suicide, Gypsy. All it took were words about planting the crimson ivy and white mums. I understand that white mums is in Japan a recognition of grief. Perhaps it should also show the reality of the situation. Very well done, sadly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be and hugs.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
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You are most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It Aldo, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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This was well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It Aldo, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting about the white chrysanthemum. I always thought of the chrysanthemum as the official seal of Japan. But it's always a funeral flower in France. I liked that the man mourns his marriage by planting the white chrysanthemum and the ivy I guess will grow around it.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Interesting about the white chrysanthemum. I always thought of the chrysanthemum as the official seal of Japan. But it's always a funeral flower in France. I liked that the man mourns his marriage by planting the white chrysanthemum and the ivy I guess will grow around it.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad write about the trauma of divorce and lack of money causing some people to contemplate suicide. Tomorrow brings many surprises, we should always sleep on our troubles as they never seem as bad in the morning, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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This is a sad write about the trauma of divorce and lack of money causing some people to contemplate suicide. Tomorrow brings many surprises, we should always sleep on our troubles as they never seem as bad in the morning, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Perhaps that's where we get our names "mums" from, when we refer to our female parent, I've wondered about the expression, whereas we call the males "dads" but a wonderful Kai katoba, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Perhaps that's where we get our names "mums" from, when we refer to our female parent, I've wondered about the expression, whereas we call the males "dads" but a wonderful Kai katoba, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
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Most welcome