Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your poem - good presentation - very colorful picture - good haiku poem - paints a good picture of the flower being weighted down by the rain drops - forcing them to bend in reverence to mother nature - nice wording - good job

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022

Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -Atticus

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

The mother flower, what a beautiful haiku the image your words provide are wonderful, and the overall presentation is excellent, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid.--Atticus

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Gypsy,
This is another of your eloquent Haku's. Great image of mums bowing.
The colorful graphics are very striking.
Have you published a book of your beautiful poetry?
You should.
Have a wonderful weekend,
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022

Yes, I published two books and I am working on third. :)

Thank you very much
for your time and kind
review.

Gypsy
The poet waits to paint the unsaid. --Atticus

reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 16-Jul-2022

Gypsy,
That?s fantastic! I don?t have enough poems or a real theme to publish yet.
Good luck with all your writing endeavors.
Blessings,
Cindy

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, I love this haiku. Good imagery. I especially liked:

mums bend in reverence
(So respectful of nature.)

Awesome presentation. I like how your lettering goes from
dark pink to light pink. This poem made me smile. Keep the
blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022

Thank you very much, latebloomer <3

Xoxoxo

Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid". -- Atticus

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I think that you have improved very much on your poetry. I like your poem. It is well written. I like your poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good job! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022

Thank you

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Gypsy,
firstly, stunning presentation with the colour and visual impact.

I'm not sure if I am off the mark in assuming the 'mum's' reference refers to a mother's day flower the chrysanthemum? Which would fit the message in juxtaposition of image.

Well, until informed differently that's my take, as it fits perfectly in with the word play in the ambiguous manner 'mums' could be interpreted... and well, mother nature always has us in awe.

I do love that something so limited in space and form can make one use their mind to float with the writers clever word construction... this one has an echo(((((((((((((((.

With our thoughts we create...
respect in knowing.

Kind regards,
James.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022

Thank you, James. You are correct.... mums are chrysanthemum. Im glad you like it. I love haiku because it's a visual art expression... to capture a moment in time...it's magical, to me. Take care, my friend.

Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."-- Atticus

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Those flowers with the larger heads fill up with the rainwater and can look very stooped. I like that you describe it as reverence to mother nature. We all need humility and gratitude to flourish! Lovely haiku!!

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022

Yes, I thought it's a strong image. It's sad when the flowers droop :(
I read that mums don't do well in the rain. Thank you for checking out my poem and for the great review.

MariVal xoxo

reply by lyenochka on 14-Jul-2022

Mums do better than camellias. Camellias sort of "rust."