Gardeners Prayer
Faith16 total reviews
Comment from Maria Millsaps
This was a beautiful poem on how mother nature takes care of its seeds to give us more. Your poem was very creative and so caring. It gave me a sense of new birth, always in our midst.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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This was a beautiful poem on how mother nature takes care of its seeds to give us more. Your poem was very creative and so caring. It gave me a sense of new birth, always in our midst.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Maria, for your beautiful words of support.
Best
John
Comment from J L Graves
What a lovely poem and prayer. I can tell you have a Gardner's Heart. I liked how your organized by the four elements. My favorite part is the last line, "Walz them gently."
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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What a lovely poem and prayer. I can tell you have a Gardner's Heart. I liked how your organized by the four elements. My favorite part is the last line, "Walz them gently."
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
Just loved your lovely short form poem, it was a great literary adventure into a unique form of word arrangements I haven't seen before, you've done an excellent job with this, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Just loved your lovely short form poem, it was a great literary adventure into a unique form of word arrangements I haven't seen before, you've done an excellent job with this, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Roy, I really appreciate your comments.
John
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Most welcome
Comment from Leah M Hege Scott/LeeStarr
Beautiful imagery with clarity and no frills.
For every stanza there is an accompanied sensation as well as the expected visualization. I read each with a sense of delaying the read to revel in the sensation.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Beautiful imagery with clarity and no frills.
For every stanza there is an accompanied sensation as well as the expected visualization. I read each with a sense of delaying the read to revel in the sensation.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for your generous insightful review.
Best
John
Comment from Teri7
I had to read this poem you have penned the Gardeners Prayer. My husband has a garden every year. You used very nice words that went so well in your prayer. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your win. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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I had to read this poem you have penned the Gardeners Prayer. My husband has a garden every year. You used very nice words that went so well in your prayer. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your win. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Teri.
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Jogn
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
What a wonderful poem - you must be a gardener to know exactly what it takes to successfully grow one. The words are meaningful and prayer-like.
Nicely done - congratulations on your win.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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What a wonderful poem - you must be a gardener to know exactly what it takes to successfully grow one. The words are meaningful and prayer-like.
Nicely done - congratulations on your win.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Pam. No, sorry to say, I am not much of gardener. Lol I do appreciate your kind thoughts though. Of course I do love the sight of well cared for garden.
Thanks again.
Best
John
Comment from Frank Malley
"Gardiners Prayer" [should be 'Gardener's Prayer] is truly a gentle prayer for seeds and plants to receive the treatment they depend upon from the elements of existence that affect them. Like many prayers, each line uses the same gentle stresses to exhort the planet, sun, rain, and wind to care for the wonderful emergences of botany that the gardener nurtures.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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"Gardiners Prayer" [should be 'Gardener's Prayer] is truly a gentle prayer for seeds and plants to receive the treatment they depend upon from the elements of existence that affect them. Like many prayers, each line uses the same gentle stresses to exhort the planet, sun, rain, and wind to care for the wonderful emergences of botany that the gardener nurtures.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Frank. I appreciate your comment and generous sixer
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John
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Hi John. Sometimes I think comments get recycled. Anyway, I hope your Sunday is benign and luscious. Frank
Comment from karenina
Well, I missed this, but came by to see the winning entry! This is lovely...for children and other living my things! Congratulations on your contest win!
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Well, I missed this, but came by to see the winning entry! This is lovely...for children and other living my things! Congratulations on your contest win!
Karenina
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much, Karenina.
I am so happy that you liked this little poem
Best
John
John
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I think your writing name is my favorite on site! It makes me smile!
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Hahaha me too.
Comment from lyenochka
This is a very clever use of the twenty syllables! I liked how you addressed the Earth, Sun, Rain, and Wind and charged them with what to do for the inhabitants of the planet. Congratulations on the win!!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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This is a very clever use of the twenty syllables! I liked how you addressed the Earth, Sun, Rain, and Wind and charged them with what to do for the inhabitants of the planet. Congratulations on the win!!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much, Helen. praise from such a successful writer as yourself is an honour indeed.
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John
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It was a pleasure to read! And don't be fooled by the rankings - that's mostly a frequency indicator. 😊
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Congratulations on your win. I can understand why. Beautifully crafted and written gardeners prayer. It has a charming and delightful touch
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Congratulations on your win. I can understand why. Beautifully crafted and written gardeners prayer. It has a charming and delightful touch
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you so very much, Mary.
A totally unexpected and pleasant surprise, I have to say. I really appreciate your kind words.
Best
John