Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

A play on words may lead to inspiration, or perhaps someone will tell you to stop the jokes, and aim for something serious. I myself need a few jokes every now and then. They can help clear our thoughts.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022

Thank you very much for your time and kind review, my friend ♡ hugs

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -Atticus

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hola Guapa, I really liked this tercet for the Japanese club. One of these days I have to try one myself. Your poem flowed so effortlessly and what a wonderful conclusion. It's very powerful, and says it all. How clever you are with words. Besitos, Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022

Thank you, Ulla. I am happy you like this poem. It was a little different. I try to keep it interesting. I really appreciate your review.

Besitos <3

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

reply by Ulla on 07-Jun-2022

So very true!

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Haha... I love the play on words and the humor embedded in this short tercet. Well done on this one. I appreciate your use of different short forms and the wonderful notes you add for explanation, Gypsy. Well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022

Thank you very much, Melissa. It's always nice to hear from you and I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -- Novalis

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Gypsy, very good, very cute, very creative. I especially liked:

writer's block
(something that we all can relate to)

Also, excellent photo choice--brick pillar that looks like a block. It pulls the poem and photo together.

Thank you for your author's note. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022

Thank you very much, my friend. I hope you will have a wonderful day. I appreciate your kind review.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your poem- very clever- good presentation- I would like to understand the picturing in your mind - wings of a muse- no big deal just curious- the muse flew away? poet's inspiration- settles on a garden pillar- in the form of writers block- clever- good job

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022

creativity to write poems... and stories... is fragile and illusive... like a butterfly spreading her winds and flying away. One day is here, the next one is gone. You never know for sure. Most writers feel writer's block.

Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

reply by AP Apgar on 07-Jun-2022

Yes- now I get the picture clearly- thanks! Hug

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation, Gypsy.
-You did a good job with the poem.
-Effective imagery that combines the muse
with the poet and the garden pillar.
-A good effect is created as the poet
finds his/her inspiration.
-A very good satori line with the double meaning.
-Very well done.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022

Thank you very much, my friend. I hope you will have a wonderful day. I appreciate your kind review.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Jun-2022

You are very welcome, Gypsy. I liked your poem. You have a good day, too!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like it! You have that double entendre of the "writer's block" which typically means something that keeps a writer from writing but here it's a source of inspiration to write!

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022

Thank you very much, Helen. I hope you will have a wonderful day. I appreciate your kind review.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Very well done indeed. I like the idea of a muse flying in and settling on a writer's block... Certainly lots of inspiration to be found there.

Vivid imagery to create such vision.

Much enjoyed. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022

Thank you very much, Gloria. It's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your positive and kind review.

Gypsy♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

Gypsy, This is a very well written Tercet poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very neat imagery to go with your words. I am going to bookcase this too! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022

Thank you vermouth, Teri I really appreciate your exceptional review and six stars. You are very kind. I'm honored that you bookcased my poem.

Gypsy♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

Comment from karenina

Excellent

So that's writer's block! I've been claiming to have it for years now! You have photographic evidence I never really had custody. Smiling here. What in heaven's name am I going to blame now? If it's not the reluctant muse and it's not writer's block... Oh my gosh. I'm just uninspiring!

Sigh. (The truth hurts!)

Karenina

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022

I doubt you are uninspiring... you are one of the best poets in fanstory. ♡

Thank you very much for your exceptional review. I really appreciate your insightful feedback and kind words.

Gypsy♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

reply by karenina on 06-Jun-2022

Many is the day I sit with pen in hand staring at the blank page...