One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. I'm not familiar with this style of poetry but I responded in a positive way. I love the artwork you chose and with the background color sets a beautiful tone. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I'm not familiar with this style of poetry but I responded in a positive way. I love the artwork you chose and with the background color sets a beautiful tone. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, KL, it's always good to hear from you.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
There is something so sweet and innocent in your words and of the picture of the child. The words and image are so delicate as the rain drops you describe.
Thank you for this read.
Best regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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There is something so sweet and innocent in your words and of the picture of the child. The words and image are so delicate as the rain drops you describe.
Thank you for this read.
Best regards,
Mary
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Mary. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The innocence of youth is evident in your 5-7-5 and rain is seen as kisses in your heavenly write, much enjoyed, easy flow and well chosen words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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The innocence of youth is evident in your 5-7-5 and rain is seen as kisses in your heavenly write, much enjoyed, easy flow and well chosen words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
This is a wonderful 5-7-5 poem as all lines connect in story, excellent alliteration, and I love "rain kisses" very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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This is a wonderful 5-7-5 poem as all lines connect in story, excellent alliteration, and I love "rain kisses" very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
Children are gorgeous, I enjoyed my children, and still do, even though they are wives and mothers, and even though our youngest grandchild is turned five, and our eldest is 14, we still enjoy them, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Children are gorgeous, I enjoyed my children, and still do, even though they are wives and mothers, and even though our youngest grandchild is turned five, and our eldest is 14, we still enjoy them, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I know what you mean, Roy. My three children are all grown up but I still think of them as my children.
Thank you very much, Roy.
Gypsy hugs
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They are indeed
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful picture by Helen Hyde, Gypsy. I loved your words because they brought the beauty of the rain kisses, the cherub and the heaven together. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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What a wonderful picture by Helen Hyde, Gypsy. I loved your words because they brought the beauty of the rain kisses, the cherub and the heaven together. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr. May you have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are most welcome, Gypsy and you as well have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Leann DS
I love the image this haiku presents! Of course, your syllable count and haiku form are impeccable as always. I was really in the mood to read a haiku, and I'm so lucky to have randomly chosen this one! Love it!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I love the image this haiku presents! Of course, your syllable count and haiku form are impeccable as always. I was really in the mood to read a haiku, and I'm so lucky to have randomly chosen this one! Love it!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, LeAnn :) I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
"Rain Kisses"
This is a 5/7/5 Poem
It must be nice to be able to experience rain.
Yes, and think of it as a gently touches your face as kisses!
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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"Rain Kisses"
This is a 5/7/5 Poem
It must be nice to be able to experience rain.
Yes, and think of it as a gently touches your face as kisses!
...
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Ricky, I appreciate your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
What an adorable 5/7/5 poem.
Generous alliteration and sweet imagery. The presentation is gorgeous (love the colours) and that artwork is just beautiful.
I will try to view the raindrops as 'kisses' in future - although that might be a challenge too far, with our British rain!
Loved it :)
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hello Gypsy :)
What an adorable 5/7/5 poem.
Generous alliteration and sweet imagery. The presentation is gorgeous (love the colours) and that artwork is just beautiful.
I will try to view the raindrops as 'kisses' in future - although that might be a challenge too far, with our British rain!
Loved it :)
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Debra :) I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from l.raven
Hi Gypsy, you can just see the kisses
falling on the little girls cheeks...
singing a lovely lullaby...
Love your poem my sweet friend...and love
this picture...very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hi Gypsy, you can just see the kisses
falling on the little girls cheeks...
singing a lovely lullaby...
Love your poem my sweet friend...and love
this picture...very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Linda :) I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Love you too.
Gypsy hugs
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your soooooo very welcome....God Bless...
love xxoo