One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from dragonpoet
Gypsy,
What a pretty photo of sunset to go with your words. The choice of font colors also whos the many colors of dusk. I like the personification of the flower.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Gypsy,
What a pretty photo of sunset to go with your words. The choice of font colors also whos the many colors of dusk. I like the personification of the flower.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Joan. I didn't know I won a contest :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Gypsy, Wow. You rocked this one. Your poem reads and flows well, and I especially liked:
on wings of sparrows -
moonflowers unfold and wave goodbye
(Soft, delicate, yet powerful imagery)
Four lines of beauty. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Hello Gypsy, Wow. You rocked this one. Your poem reads and flows well, and I especially liked:
on wings of sparrows -
moonflowers unfold and wave goodbye
(Soft, delicate, yet powerful imagery)
Four lines of beauty. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Margaret:) I appreciate your time and review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
What a beautiful poem. You did a nice job with the prompt. Good luck in the contest. Your writing is light and delicate. I also responded to composition. The changing of the text color works well.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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What a beautiful poem. You did a nice job with the prompt. Good luck in the contest. Your writing is light and delicate. I also responded to composition. The changing of the text color works well.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, KL. :) I appreciate your time and review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Eunice Amero
Very nice poem. Dusk can get into anything with the win. Very picture picture. Wings of sparrows carry it from place to place. The there is the dusk that causes the flower to open up. Good job and good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Very nice poem. Dusk can get into anything with the win. Very picture picture. Wings of sparrows carry it from place to place. The there is the dusk that causes the flower to open up. Good job and good luck.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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you are very welcome
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You have a great piece of work on this post. Short, to the point. A beautiful picture along with the perfect words. Your mind is sharp. And I wish you the best, and hope you win the contest. I did enjoy viewing your work.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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You have a great piece of work on this post. Short, to the point. A beautiful picture along with the perfect words. Your mind is sharp. And I wish you the best, and hope you win the contest. I did enjoy viewing your work.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- good energy soothing to the heart- a ride on the north wind at dust with flowers waving- Thank you! Good picture- good luck with your contest!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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I like your poem- good energy soothing to the heart- a ride on the north wind at dust with flowers waving- Thank you! Good picture- good luck with your contest!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much AP. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the Four Line Poem contest, Gypsy. The picture was lovely and depicted a peach sunset. Your words in the four line poem contest made reference to 1) the peach sunset and 2) the fact that Moonflowers bloom at night. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Good luck wishes regarding the Four Line Poem contest, Gypsy. The picture was lovely and depicted a peach sunset. Your words in the four line poem contest made reference to 1) the peach sunset and 2) the fact that Moonflowers bloom at night. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Aryr. Blessed be, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs!
Comment from lyenochka
Cool! And I like how many transitions you give us in this brief poem from the peach of dusk, to the flight of sparrows and ending with a flower that blooms at night. Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Cool! And I like how many transitions you give us in this brief poem from the peach of dusk, to the flight of sparrows and ending with a flower that blooms at night. Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen. I've only won one site contest, I won several second place. The 100 dollars were welcome. It felt more like a win instead of fanstory funny money LoL
Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words. Blessings.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I must admit I love this, it says a lot fo words and the sheer value of them, it shows how one can blend them so beautifully with nature and embellish the meaning, creating imagery, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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I must admit I love this, it says a lot fo words and the sheer value of them, it shows how one can blend them so beautifully with nature and embellish the meaning, creating imagery, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I am happy you like it. Blessings.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from Wanderlust53
Beautiful imagery, your words do justice to the art and the art enhances your words. If you read my work you would see it is something I have a problem creating to my satisfaction. So I display no art. I'm working on it though.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Beautiful imagery, your words do justice to the art and the art enhances your words. If you read my work you would see it is something I have a problem creating to my satisfaction. So I display no art. I'm working on it though.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Hello, Wanderlust, I would be happy to help you out with the presentations. Let me know.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I am happy you like it. Blessings.
Gypsy hugs