One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from jaded831
Very poetic almost zen like, your poem made me feel peaceful. Maybe it was the repetition of the gs & cs. While the word dance brought a bit of magic is to the piece. Whatever the reason great poem.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Very poetic almost zen like, your poem made me feel peaceful. Maybe it was the repetition of the gs & cs. While the word dance brought a bit of magic is to the piece. Whatever the reason great poem.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry reads well, Gypsy. Good job with the correct syllable count per line. I like the use of g alliteration and the gazelles. The picture is beautiful, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Your contest entry reads well, Gypsy. Good job with the correct syllable count per line. I like the use of g alliteration and the gazelles. The picture is beautiful, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. I really appreciate it.
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Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading your 5/7/5 poem.
Your use of alliteration is generous and the imagery you present is vivid - what a great scene and you give those gazelles character. Nice!
Best wishes as always, Debra
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading your 5/7/5 poem.
Your use of alliteration is generous and the imagery you present is vivid - what a great scene and you give those gazelles character. Nice!
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. I really appreciate it.
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Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Alliterations galore! We all wonder what animals we can envision in those white puffy or cirrus clouds.
Graceful gazelle is a good image. Good photograph you chose.
Mark
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Gypsy,
Alliterations galore! We all wonder what animals we can envision in those white puffy or cirrus clouds.
Graceful gazelle is a good image. Good photograph you chose.
Mark
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
What an interesting word picture you paint to go along with the lovely photo. It is easy to imagine those cautious glances upward through gazelle lashes.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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What an interesting word picture you paint to go along with the lovely photo. It is easy to imagine those cautious glances upward through gazelle lashes.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lovely, descriptive poem makes excellent use of the few allowed syllables. It conveys an expressive message about one part of nature being in awe of another. Effective use of alliteration
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Your lovely, descriptive poem makes excellent use of the few allowed syllables. It conveys an expressive message about one part of nature being in awe of another. Effective use of alliteration
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and by surreptitiously, do you mean like I could never do in Junior High when I was staring at Kathy? I always got caught looking!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and by surreptitiously, do you mean like I could never do in Junior High when I was staring at Kathy? I always got caught looking!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Hah hah...
Thank you very much, Mike. I appreciate your time and review. You are very kind.
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Comment from royowen
Yep, this confirms my epiphany today, like the gazelle, not wanting to appear to be worried about the celestial cirrus clouds, goes about Judy munching away, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Yep, this confirms my epiphany today, like the gazelle, not wanting to appear to be worried about the celestial cirrus clouds, goes about Judy munching away, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Roy. Blessings.
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Well done
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Gypsy, your 5/7/5 poem is filled with vivid imagery and good alliteration for the G and C letters. I especially liked:
graceful gazelles glance
(I can just see it)
Well chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Hello Gypsy, your 5/7/5 poem is filled with vivid imagery and good alliteration for the G and C letters. I especially liked:
graceful gazelles glance
(I can just see it)
Well chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, late bloomer. I appreciate your time and review. You are very kind.
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Comment from aryr
This was very well done, Gypsy. Not only was the picture of the cirrus clouds but your words definitely showed the gazelles gaze upon the sky. I am so glad you explained your words in the narrative notes, some might not catch their meaning. Blessed be n hugs.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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This was very well done, Gypsy. Not only was the picture of the cirrus clouds but your words definitely showed the gazelles gaze upon the sky. I am so glad you explained your words in the narrative notes, some might not catch their meaning. Blessed be n hugs.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Yes, if I'm not sure I always check the dictionary and think somebody else may need it too. :)
Thank you, Aryr. You are the best. It's always a pleasure to hear from you. Blessed be.
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