After the Storm
The Bridges poetry form30 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow, Yvonne, I wondered how good the poem of the month could be and after reading it I am convinced! This is superb in every way! With details made up of musical instruments such as the kettle drum and cymbals. I love music it is great for me I play most of the instruments in a rock band!
This is wonderful and entertaining, all the best that poetry can provide! I am happy you received the best poem of the month now that I know just how it plays out!
Jesse
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Wow, Yvonne, I wondered how good the poem of the month could be and after reading it I am convinced! This is superb in every way! With details made up of musical instruments such as the kettle drum and cymbals. I love music it is great for me I play most of the instruments in a rock band!
This is wonderful and entertaining, all the best that poetry can provide! I am happy you received the best poem of the month now that I know just how it plays out!
Jesse
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this awesome review, Jesse. I really appreciate it. I'm so happy you like my poem that much.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
SSSSSStunning, Yvonne! Congratulations on your well-deserved win for poem of the month. A tour de force of inundation! SSSSSStupendous. Cheerssssss. LIZ
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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SSSSSStunning, Yvonne! Congratulations on your well-deserved win for poem of the month. A tour de force of inundation! SSSSSStupendous. Cheerssssss. LIZ
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Liz, for this awesome review. I truly appreciate it!
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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 A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for the recognition this post has received from the FanStory community. While this was not a Contest Committee decision, the committee recognizes this achievement with a seven star review. |
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Yvonne!
Such a rhythmical and moving poem told in Bridges format.
Your ability to create "word pictures" is fantastic.
How I love a "good storm" as long as no one is harmed and nothing is destroyed! And northern Michigan surely has her share of such events.
Thank you for sharing both this poetic format and poetic description.
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
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Hello Yvonne!
Such a rhythmical and moving poem told in Bridges format.
Your ability to create "word pictures" is fantastic.
How I love a "good storm" as long as no one is harmed and nothing is destroyed! And northern Michigan surely has her share of such events.
Thank you for sharing both this poetic format and poetic description.
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 04-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Diane. I, too, like a "good storm."
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I must stop moping about and come back properly. I missed this amazing poem of yours, and think it's a brilliant one for the poem of the month award, (for which you have my vote) All the sounds that hit the eardrums you've worked into this one: Cymbals clashing (loved that line) in fact I've got to say, I loved the whole poem, it was amazing! Well done, dear SATP and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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I must stop moping about and come back properly. I missed this amazing poem of yours, and think it's a brilliant one for the poem of the month award, (for which you have my vote) All the sounds that hit the eardrums you've worked into this one: Cymbals clashing (loved that line) in fact I've got to say, I loved the whole poem, it was amazing! Well done, dear SATP and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your love and support. I hope you are feeling better now. Love you lots.
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Yes, I'm just waiting to get to see the neurologist on Monday. It's been ages. That poem of yours is truly amazing, my talented sister. Love you back, more. xxx
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Let me know the minute you have some results! Prayers going for you.
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I will, but we'll chat before that. Perhaps later tomorrow when I come home from the shopping. About 5pm my time? xxx
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Sounds good.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You've used great descriptions of a storm, pummeling the ground, deafening cymbals clash - that's the sound I hate. Great work with your Bridges poem Yvonne, and a lovely presentation,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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You've used great descriptions of a storm, pummeling the ground, deafening cymbals clash - that's the sound I hate. Great work with your Bridges poem Yvonne, and a lovely presentation,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Sally Law
As I stated in your birthday tribute, there's nothing you won't try in the poetry realm. You make me want to be brave with this stunner. The marching band sound adds to the drama. Superb. I'm wanting for a six!! Please accept my virtual six with compliments.
Sending you my very best,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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As I stated in your birthday tribute, there's nothing you won't try in the poetry realm. You make me want to be brave with this stunner. The marching band sound adds to the drama. Superb. I'm wanting for a six!! Please accept my virtual six with compliments.
Sending you my very best,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much. I re-read all my birthday greets this afternoon. I finally deleted them, but I did so enjoy them. Thanks to you.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully crafted and skilful rendition of Robert Frost's poetic form "Bridges" and that's exactly how it sounds, forming crossings to a distant destination, I assume that's what its purpose is. It's sweetly written with great articulation and finesse, well done Yvonne, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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A beautifully crafted and skilful rendition of Robert Frost's poetic form "Bridges" and that's exactly how it sounds, forming crossings to a distant destination, I assume that's what its purpose is. It's sweetly written with great articulation and finesse, well done Yvonne, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much!
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Bless you Yvonne
Comment from Paul McFarland
Every time I think you guys have given me the last known poetry form, you lay another one on me. This form is more appealing to me than I thought it would be.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Every time I think you guys have given me the last known poetry form, you lay another one on me. This form is more appealing to me than I thought it would be.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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It is an interesting one, and enjoyable to do. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh wow, what a lovely poem, Yvonne, and a format that's new to me; at least the actual name of it. (lol) That storm came to life for me in my imagination with your sublime poem!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Oh wow, what a lovely poem, Yvonne, and a format that's new to me; at least the actual name of it. (lol) That storm came to life for me in my imagination with your sublime poem!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Oh, I'm glad it came to life. I love a good thunder-boomer if it doesn't cause damage. Thank you for a wonderful review.
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It was my pleasure!
