One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from pharp
Gypsy,
I wish I had a six-star rating to give this beautifully penned Haiku.
Oustanding presentation; I love your colorful message.
Thanks for sharing.
I pray you are having a wonderful day.
Hugs...Portia
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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Gypsy,
I wish I had a six-star rating to give this beautifully penned Haiku.
Oustanding presentation; I love your colorful message.
Thanks for sharing.
I pray you are having a wonderful day.
Hugs...Portia
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much, Portia. I appreciate you took the time to read and review my poem.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Beautiful poem. The artwork chosen to accompany your writing is absolutely stunning. Very attractive presentation. Love how you also portayed your message with colors. Nice work! Congrats.
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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Beautiful poem. The artwork chosen to accompany your writing is absolutely stunning. Very attractive presentation. Love how you also portayed your message with colors. Nice work! Congrats.
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your outstanding review and six stars!! I appreciate your kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from harmony13
Such a lovely poem! The author's words are descriptive, clear and creative.
I thought about the fireflies and how they really do sparkle! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these
words. Hope you are having a great week!.....Maria
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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Such a lovely poem! The author's words are descriptive, clear and creative.
I thought about the fireflies and how they really do sparkle! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these
words. Hope you are having a great week!.....Maria
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Maria.
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Comment from Ulla
This is wonderful, Marival. I loved it. The imagery is so vivid. I could just imagine it.
'flutter amidst dewy reeds': I loved that line. So well thought out. Thanks so much for sharing. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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This is wonderful, Marival. I loved it. The imagery is so vivid. I could just imagine it.
'flutter amidst dewy reeds': I loved that line. So well thought out. Thanks so much for sharing. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from amada
Beautiful and peaceful image, as always, you are a master in short and deep descriptions, dear poet. I like the sense of serenity in your short lines. Your choice of artwork is perfect. I wish you the best in this popular contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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Beautiful and peaceful image, as always, you are a master in short and deep descriptions, dear poet. I like the sense of serenity in your short lines. Your choice of artwork is perfect. I wish you the best in this popular contest.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never seen a firefly and the scene must be magical and sparkly and like a fairytale fantasy, especially among the blossom, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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I have never seen a firefly and the scene must be magical and sparkly and like a fairytale fantasy, especially among the blossom, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
GBR,
Do like your overall presentation. Another exceptional illustration is paired with your verse.
I can see how spotlight takes on a certain nuance, but IMHO, given your artwork, moonlight might be an alternative.
Mark
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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GBR,
Do like your overall presentation. Another exceptional illustration is paired with your verse.
I can see how spotlight takes on a certain nuance, but IMHO, given your artwork, moonlight might be an alternative.
Mark
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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You missed the punchline... fireflies spotlight...
Thanks
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, Gypsy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-Animal groups definitely
have interesting names.
-You wrote a good haiku
with effective nature and
seasonal imagery.
-We can picture the fireflies
and the "dewy reeds."
-A good satori line, too.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Gypsy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-Animal groups definitely
have interesting names.
-You wrote a good haiku
with effective nature and
seasonal imagery.
-We can picture the fireflies
and the "dewy reeds."
-A good satori line, too.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome, Gypsy.
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Your words connect two images of fireflies and that of a field of blossoms, love the artwork, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Your words connect two images of fireflies and that of a field of blossoms, love the artwork, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much, Kym. :)
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Comment from Gloria ....
Ah, I did not know that a group of fireflies is called a sparkle, but it makes sense now that I know.
Great job with this, gypsy. The entire scene plays out with vivid brightness. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Ah, I did not know that a group of fireflies is called a sparkle, but it makes sense now that I know.
Great job with this, gypsy. The entire scene plays out with vivid brightness. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much, Gloria :) may you have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs