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Spring Haiku

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Fireflies Flutter

by Gypsy Blue Rose


A Group of Fireflies is called a Sparkle (for rules, please check my author notes)


fireflies flutter

amidst dewy reeds —

blossoms in the spotlight

 

 



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A group of fireflies is called a light posse or a sparkle.

KIGO spring for blossoms

HAIKU is a Japanese short poem that uses imagistic language to convey the essence of an experience of nature intuitively linked to the human condition. FORM: In Japanese, haiku is written in three lines 5/7/5. In English, it's 17 syllables or less, as brief as possible.

The essence of haiku is represented by the juxtaposition of two images or ideas separated by a dash to pause for introspection, usually at end of the second line.

source of 5/7/5 syllables rule ***
source haiku rules by William J. Higginson, Haiku Society of America *** HaikuWorld.org


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Gypsy

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