Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello, Yvonne. I enjoyed reading your lovely poem about wandering off into books and becoming anything, or going anywhere you want. Very well written and fun to read.

Melissa

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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019

Thank you. I appreciate this review so much.

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Cheers, Damommy;
> Right to the point. I really like this a lot thanks for sharing your inner likes with us.
> I do have a place very similar to yours
> The writing's Enjambment flows smoothly due to the contingent rhyming with the context In a very subtle and understandable conceptual theme.
>This seventh line from above 1/3 line up from below use a cliché that strictly passé when you use the words, "you see." I would've probably used the last two syllables As the word with. "ABLY", instead of you see.
>I really enjoyed it and thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alx

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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019

Thanks for the suggestion, and for reviewing. I'll take a look at that.

reply by krys123 on 25-Feb-2019

You are very welcome, Damommy, In the most important underlying reason why I like your palm because it supports reading for any age.
Take care and have a good one.
Alx