Closer To God
Free Verse31 total reviews
Comment from Val Crisson
As always the romantic language of love is exquisite, and the idea of flying when one might fall is a beautiful image. In fact there are so many beautiful images here, it boggles my mind. "Your words are made of gossamer that was spun from silver strands" - lovely line.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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As always the romantic language of love is exquisite, and the idea of flying when one might fall is a beautiful image. In fact there are so many beautiful images here, it boggles my mind. "Your words are made of gossamer that was spun from silver strands" - lovely line.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Sigh thank you Val for a beautiful review.
Comment from donaldcolson
Lovely romance poetry. Fo0r my taste I would prefer something a bit less flowery but nI realize that flowery is your strength. A couple of the metaphors are a bit hard for me to follow. When it comes to love and romance you are the champ. don
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Lovely romance poetry. Fo0r my taste I would prefer something a bit less flowery but nI realize that flowery is your strength. A couple of the metaphors are a bit hard for me to follow. When it comes to love and romance you are the champ. don
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much Don for a wonderful review.
Comment from l.raven
HI Blue, no one else but us...feeling all there is to feel... holding on to every moment...hummm....a beautiful poem you...I love it...so very nicely written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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HI Blue, no one else but us...feeling all there is to feel... holding on to every moment...hummm....a beautiful poem you...I love it...so very nicely written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much Linda for a beautiful review.
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you so welcome you...xxoo
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Smile Linda.
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I'm working on it!!! LOL...got it!!!luff
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Got it girl.
Comment from Frankeddy
Very exciting and lively poem.
Accompanied with a beautiful picture.
Your wording just dazzles me, I feel like I'm on the trip with you.
All presented in a bright and colourful setting.
Well done. Frankeddy
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Very exciting and lively poem.
Accompanied with a beautiful picture.
Your wording just dazzles me, I feel like I'm on the trip with you.
All presented in a bright and colourful setting.
Well done. Frankeddy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thank you so very much Ed for a wonderful review. I appreciate it.
Comment from 1954speed
You are a true romantic! Your poems always touch a chord of exclusive love between a man and a woman. This piece is intimate, loving and well paced. A man immersed in his ove for a woman. Very well done.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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You are a true romantic! Your poems always touch a chord of exclusive love between a man and a woman. This piece is intimate, loving and well paced. A man immersed in his ove for a woman. Very well done.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Speed for a wonderful review.
Comment from Lysa Schuler
This was an excellent poem. It was written to perfection. meter was timed perfection. Flowed graceful, subject was clear. The poem ended nicely, on a poetic thoughtful sentiment of, what I perceived as, wishful longing. It also leaves behind an element of mystery. It's nice to be able to give you a six, at last. I've been out of them for awhile. All your poems are excellent. Keep writing, and God bless.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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This was an excellent poem. It was written to perfection. meter was timed perfection. Flowed graceful, subject was clear. The poem ended nicely, on a poetic thoughtful sentiment of, what I perceived as, wishful longing. It also leaves behind an element of mystery. It's nice to be able to give you a six, at last. I've been out of them for awhile. All your poems are excellent. Keep writing, and God bless.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thank you so very muc Lysa for a beautiful review and your awesome comments.
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You're so very welcom Gungalo, thamk you for sharing. Many blessings.
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Smiling.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Gungalo,
"No one else has a presence in this piece of us. No one else is allowed here. This place is not to be shared by anyone but you and me" .... I should say not! Who would want to share a piece of this unrivalled ecstasy with a third party? :)
Many great lines in this piece. Loved you choice of the word "culled".
Fave lines ... "Into the depths of each other we spin. A current carries us into streaming ribbons of desire" ... whoo! Excellent, original imagery here!
This is very, very good and aptly conveys a passionate love that clearly grows stronger and stronger.
Great poem, Gungalo!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Gungalo,
"No one else has a presence in this piece of us. No one else is allowed here. This place is not to be shared by anyone but you and me" .... I should say not! Who would want to share a piece of this unrivalled ecstasy with a third party? :)
Many great lines in this piece. Loved you choice of the word "culled".
Fave lines ... "Into the depths of each other we spin. A current carries us into streaming ribbons of desire" ... whoo! Excellent, original imagery here!
This is very, very good and aptly conveys a passionate love that clearly grows stronger and stronger.
Great poem, Gungalo!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Sigh Connie, you really got it girl. Thank you so much for such a wonderful review.
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You're welcome! Enjoy your day! :)
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Sigh I will thanks. You too girl.
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:)
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Sigh.
Comment from emrpoems
Eloquently written poem about your desires for your loved one.As usual you write with so much passion and take the reader along with you to another world. However, I could not understand how this experience took you closer to God
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Eloquently written poem about your desires for your loved one.As usual you write with so much passion and take the reader along with you to another world. However, I could not understand how this experience took you closer to God
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Smile girl. You will figure it out. Thanks so much for this awesome review.
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HOPE i CAN BUT i DOUBT IT VERY MUCH
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Sigh.
Comment from Deborah Marie
Beautiful free verse poem and photo. Clever wording. Wonderful rhythm, progression and flow. Set-up is stunning. Thanks for sharing, Deb
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Beautiful free verse poem and photo. Clever wording. Wonderful rhythm, progression and flow. Set-up is stunning. Thanks for sharing, Deb
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much Deb for a wonderful review and your comments.
Comment from c_lucas
Lovers lost in their own world bringing each other to a higher level. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Lovers lost in their own world bringing each other to a higher level. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much Charlie for a wonderful review. Sigh.
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You're welcome, Gungalo. Charlie
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Smiling.
