Rabbit on the Run
Kratos and the rabbit24 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
I like dogs, but those poor little bunnies! At least he doesn't Catch then...lol. l like this cute poem, is that a picture of his dog? I had a dog once that chased cars...never caught one though. :)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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I like dogs, but those poor little bunnies! At least he doesn't Catch then...lol. l like this cute poem, is that a picture of his dog? I had a dog once that chased cars...never caught one though. :)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the wonderful review. Kratos is in my profile picture.
I appreciate you.
Cecilia
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
Very cute poem. Love how you write about Chase the dog chasing the rabbit! This will be enjoyable for kids. Thank you for sharing and looking forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Very cute poem. Love how you write about Chase the dog chasing the rabbit! This will be enjoyable for kids. Thank you for sharing and looking forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Mrs. Anna,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you.
Cecilia
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully done. I see you were able to tighten up the lines and that makes it for a very nice nonet. I only have one little problem with it. Your seven syllable line has eight syllables. Instead of saying he exercises, you might say exercising for the chase. Patricia
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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This is beautifully done. I see you were able to tighten up the lines and that makes it for a very nice nonet. I only have one little problem with it. Your seven syllable line has eight syllables. Instead of saying he exercises, you might say exercising for the chase. Patricia
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Patricia,
Thank you for the great review. I will go fix it asap. Thank you for pointing that out. I appreciate you.
Cecilia
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your poem! The way you capture Kratos' determination is fantastic. I love how the rabbits are challenging. The format works really well here. I also like how the last few lines give a sense of Kratos determination. Your poem has a fun energy to it that made me smile. Keep up the great work!
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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I really enjoyed your poem! The way you capture Kratos' determination is fantastic. I love how the rabbits are challenging. The format works really well here. I also like how the last few lines give a sense of Kratos determination. Your poem has a fun energy to it that made me smile. Keep up the great work!
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Michael,
Thank you for the beautiful review. Kratos loves the rabbits. I hope he never catches one, as that could be a bloody mess.
Cecilia
