The Kirby Case - Part 9 - Final
We learn the fate of the serial killer23 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Very well done!! What an apt ending, it was what he deserved and I doubt anyone of his victims families will grieve his loss. Well, Pam, I'm hoping we will have more cases to solve with Mike and his team. I can see loads of books coming up on Amazon! What I was really impressed with, apart from the detective work you brilliantly added, was how fluid your rhymes were. You can give yourself a pat of the back, my friend. A worthy six star! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Very well done!! What an apt ending, it was what he deserved and I doubt anyone of his victims families will grieve his loss. Well, Pam, I'm hoping we will have more cases to solve with Mike and his team. I can see loads of books coming up on Amazon! What I was really impressed with, apart from the detective work you brilliantly added, was how fluid your rhymes were. You can give yourself a pat of the back, my friend. A worthy six star! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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What can I say, Sandra? You have been so supportive throughout this entire series that I wish I could say I was going to write a sequel but this was one of the most difficult things I’ve ever attempted.
Thanks again for the extra star and for all of your feedback. I lost readers along the way because a lot of people aren’t interested in murder mysteries and as soon as they saw Kirby and the title, they didn’t even view it so I got very few views towards the end
But the people that liked it really liked it so I may put together a two-parter or something like that
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This was a very realistic story of what evil happens in the world, a case that had a committed detective and his team, and a fitting end to the killer. Perhaps that mob was not able to do the job, but things happen inside prisons.
Great job, Pam. I enjoyed it and you stayed true to doing it the right way and not rushing or cutting corners.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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This was a very realistic story of what evil happens in the world, a case that had a committed detective and his team, and a fitting end to the killer. Perhaps that mob was not able to do the job, but things happen inside prisons.
Great job, Pam. I enjoyed it and you stayed true to doing it the right way and not rushing or cutting corners.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Wow. Thank you, Pam, for reading and reviewing my poem and for giving me the generous rating of six stars.!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, it sounds like the death penalty was used as America still uses this method of punishment. The story is over and revenge is complete in your story of this serial killer Pam. A sad tale of many unnecessary deaths, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Oh dear, it sounds like the death penalty was used as America still uses this method of punishment. The story is over and revenge is complete in your story of this serial killer Pam. A sad tale of many unnecessary deaths, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Dolly for taking the time to read this epic poem and communicating your thoughts in this review.
