Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Eric Clapton"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from Writer51
Your words form a vision of the photo that accompanies the poem with all the musicians on stage having fun as well as entertaining thousands in a stadium. Thanks for the thoughts.
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Your words form a vision of the photo that accompanies the poem with all the musicians on stage having fun as well as entertaining thousands in a stadium. Thanks for the thoughts.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
Comment from MelB
Hi Luna, this is a well written acrostic about your favorite musician. Good descriptions and use of alliteration. Haven't heard anything from him in a long time.
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Hi Luna, this is a well written acrostic about your favorite musician. Good descriptions and use of alliteration. Haven't heard anything from him in a long time.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
Comment from MissMerri
This seemed to me to be a splendid acrostic in honor of the musician Eric Clapton. I could see no way I'd want to change anything so I'll just wish you good luck in the contest. Your son, I'm sure, would have loved this one.
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This seemed to me to be a splendid acrostic in honor of the musician Eric Clapton. I could see no way I'd want to change anything so I'll just wish you good luck in the contest. Your son, I'm sure, would have loved this one.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
Comment from valmay
So many of the musicians of the 60s and 70s were indeed the thought provoking poets of a new generation. You brought that back to me in your tribute to Eric Clapton. Thanks.
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So many of the musicians of the 60s and 70s were indeed the thought provoking poets of a new generation. You brought that back to me in your tribute to Eric Clapton. Thanks.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
Comment from robina1978
Great photo that complements your poem perfectly. It is a properly written Acrostic about Eric Clapton. We have heard of him as well. No mistakes found.
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Great photo that complements your poem perfectly. It is a properly written Acrostic about Eric Clapton. We have heard of him as well. No mistakes found.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
Comment from DR DIP
I love Layla AND TEARS IN HEAVEN TO CONTRASTING SONGS FROM EITHER END OF THE SPECTRUM. yOUR LINES REFLECT THE MAN PERFECTLYshit sorry about the caps lok just looked up lol
dip
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I love Layla AND TEARS IN HEAVEN TO CONTRASTING SONGS FROM EITHER END OF THE SPECTRUM. yOUR LINES REFLECT THE MAN PERFECTLYshit sorry about the caps lok just looked up lol
dip
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed reading your well written acrostic, Eric Clapton. Excellen picture and presentation.
A great artist with so many heartfelt songs
Well done
Blessings
Janet
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I enjoyed reading your well written acrostic, Eric Clapton. Excellen picture and presentation.
A great artist with so many heartfelt songs
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
Comment from oliver818
Great poem, you really captured the essence of Eric clapton there, brilliant! Thanks for sharing and have a great day!
Oliver
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Great poem, you really captured the essence of Eric clapton there, brilliant! Thanks for sharing and have a great day!
Oliver
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
Comment from misscookie
The picture you choose to go with your poem
Is a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
I could hear the music as I read your words.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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The picture you choose to go with your poem
Is a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
I could hear the music as I read your words.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
Comment from Badger_29
Being a professional musician, Having seen him at shoreline and learning his secret riffs to :Tears in Heaven", AND having just done MY first acrostic fir the Christmas contest, I LOVED everything about this wonderful acrostic. I also very much enjoyed that you were able to convey in here his passion for performing with others, creation sliding from one-hundred guitars. I could here the shredding in my mind> I am also a lover and a player of the blues, and one of my mottos is: " If you are going to PLAY the blues, ya' gotta' live the blues", and Eric and I, I believe we have paid our dues. Well Done ! Darren
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2016
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Being a professional musician, Having seen him at shoreline and learning his secret riffs to :Tears in Heaven", AND having just done MY first acrostic fir the Christmas contest, I LOVED everything about this wonderful acrostic. I also very much enjoyed that you were able to convey in here his passion for performing with others, creation sliding from one-hundred guitars. I could here the shredding in my mind> I am also a lover and a player of the blues, and one of my mottos is: " If you are going to PLAY the blues, ya' gotta' live the blues", and Eric and I, I believe we have paid our dues. Well Done ! Darren
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2016
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Dear Badger, I have to thank you for this six-star review. I'm truly honored by your rating. I enjoyed reading your review, and I thank you once again for the wonderful rating.
Always
jeni
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You are so welcome, keep writing ~
