Closer To God
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Comment from DR DIP
I so wish you had entered this in the love poem competition gungalo that is a sublime piece of writing.
I suppose beauty is in the eye of the perceiver and I can see the beauty in your words beautifully written in my eyes
dip
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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I so wish you had entered this in the love poem competition gungalo that is a sublime piece of writing.
I suppose beauty is in the eye of the perceiver and I can see the beauty in your words beautifully written in my eyes
dip
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Dip but I don't enter contests. This is an awesome review. Thank you.
Comment from Ekim777
There are many potent phrases in this piece as the poet talks of the scent of heightened senses and of the torrid mind; the core of a beautiful mind. (I have my doubts.) Can we believe that we are brought closer to God. (When passion flare are not out lusts quickly extinguished) But there are places that we explore where right and wrong are irrelevant.
I'll withdraw now, before I shred all meaning of our delicate lusts. -Ekim777
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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There are many potent phrases in this piece as the poet talks of the scent of heightened senses and of the torrid mind; the core of a beautiful mind. (I have my doubts.) Can we believe that we are brought closer to God. (When passion flare are not out lusts quickly extinguished) But there are places that we explore where right and wrong are irrelevant.
I'll withdraw now, before I shred all meaning of our delicate lusts. -Ekim777
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you Mike. I don't believe that you could shred all meaning of my delicate lusts. We are closer to God when in this situation. Sigh.
Comment from LoannaLois
This is such a love letter that I feel blessed to have been made privy to...Each word or phrase sings to the tribute you write. May your relationship in life enjoy half the love and passion this writing shares.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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This is such a love letter that I feel blessed to have been made privy to...Each word or phrase sings to the tribute you write. May your relationship in life enjoy half the love and passion this writing shares.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Lois thanks so very much girl. This writing is from my life.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Gungalo, this is the most wonderful poem I've read today, it is amazing. I easily could say there isn't one part that outshines the other, each stanza is a gem of its own. But these lines are so full of emotion, energy and love:
Now, we bank, twirl and roll through fields of flowers
and blossoms that move so wild with frenzy.
Their scent permeates our already heightened senses.
That must be some wonderful field you are rolling in! :) xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Gungalo, this is the most wonderful poem I've read today, it is amazing. I easily could say there isn't one part that outshines the other, each stanza is a gem of its own. But these lines are so full of emotion, energy and love:
Now, we bank, twirl and roll through fields of flowers
and blossoms that move so wild with frenzy.
Their scent permeates our already heightened senses.
That must be some wonderful field you are rolling in! :) xsx Sandra
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Sandra, Sandra. Thank you so much girl and the field is wonderful. So much so that I had to share it.
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I am so pleased you did. :) x
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Smile.
Comment from padumachitta
Hello. I like the look of this(Idon't usually comment on this)..but, the look of it moves me through as well as the words. As always, the words are so full of passion and longing. So full of atmosphere.
padumachitta(ps, I have posted a poem called two wome,two rings...I would be interested in your opinion on it.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Hello. I like the look of this(Idon't usually comment on this)..but, the look of it moves me through as well as the words. As always, the words are so full of passion and longing. So full of atmosphere.
padumachitta(ps, I have posted a poem called two wome,two rings...I would be interested in your opinion on it.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Padu. I'll read it and see.
Comment from rouskin
explode into an eternal fire of depravation.You bring me closer to God. It doesn't matter if it's wrong or right.
The trip is, oh, so worth it.
Who is that lucky man ....
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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explode into an eternal fire of depravation.You bring me closer to God. It doesn't matter if it's wrong or right.
The trip is, oh, so worth it.
Who is that lucky man ....
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thanks Rouskin for a beautiful review. (I'll never tell.)
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Smile :)
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Smiling at you Rouskin.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Wow! That surely was an amazing flight- and not a feather out of place.
Your chosen format and meter enhance the depth and meaning of your carefully chosen words.
I applaud your clever image choice and overall presentation.
The constant changing of the rhythm mimics the rise and fall of flight to perfection.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Wow! That surely was an amazing flight- and not a feather out of place.
Your chosen format and meter enhance the depth and meaning of your carefully chosen words.
I applaud your clever image choice and overall presentation.
The constant changing of the rhythm mimics the rise and fall of flight to perfection.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Seken for a beautiful review. Sigh.
Comment from Jackarrie
hi Pam this is so beautifully written, I just love the chosen words in this freestyle poem, You are so talented
Now, we bank, twirl and roll through fields of flowers
and blossoms that move so wild with frenzy.
Their scent permeates our already heightened senses.
A well deserved six
Mary
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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hi Pam this is so beautifully written, I just love the chosen words in this freestyle poem, You are so talented
Now, we bank, twirl and roll through fields of flowers
and blossoms that move so wild with frenzy.
Their scent permeates our already heightened senses.
A well deserved six
Mary
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Mary thank you so much girl for a wonderful review.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another comprehensive poem that the author has written with this piece of writing. We all hope to have a love that is all-consuming. This is what makes life worth living.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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This is yet another comprehensive poem that the author has written with this piece of writing. We all hope to have a love that is all-consuming. This is what makes life worth living.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you ever so much Tom for a gorgeous review.
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My pleasure yet again
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Smile.
Comment from tbacha58
You bring me closer to God.
It doesn't matter if it's wrong or right.
The trip is, oh, so worth it.
A thousand times over
I'll never regret
knowing or being
reminded of
you!
Hello nite lady, That poem needs you to hear the clapping of your spectators even if yo do not see them, just listen. Beautiful, amazing, deep, breathless, romantic, etc. as usual I am out of breath. That was amazing my friend. Love u Terry xoxo Never stop being that sexy romantic woman. (Nite lady for me)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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You bring me closer to God.
It doesn't matter if it's wrong or right.
The trip is, oh, so worth it.
A thousand times over
I'll never regret
knowing or being
reminded of
you!
Hello nite lady, That poem needs you to hear the clapping of your spectators even if yo do not see them, just listen. Beautiful, amazing, deep, breathless, romantic, etc. as usual I am out of breath. That was amazing my friend. Love u Terry xoxo Never stop being that sexy romantic woman. (Nite lady for me)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Terry thank you so much girl for this awesome review. Sigh.
