The Caravan of Encroaching Evil
an acrostic6 total reviews
Comment from Lady Jane
This is by far my favorite acrostic. They're all excellent, but this one is timely, relatable, and thought provoking. Not to mention, well thought out and conveyed. Presentation was awesome. Good luck in the contest.
Janelle
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This is by far my favorite acrostic. They're all excellent, but this one is timely, relatable, and thought provoking. Not to mention, well thought out and conveyed. Presentation was awesome. Good luck in the contest.
Janelle
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
Comment from krys123
Cheers contestant;
>I'm a hypocrite as I showed you no compassion And I lowered myself, not to your level but the level of those who think like you.
> Everyone's opinion are theirs and I have to respect that, but I necessarily don't have to agree with it.
> It's just that the intensity and the fear turning into hatred is what disturbs me the most. And that the propaganda coming from the antichrist's puppet.
Take care and have a good morning good luck.
Alx
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Cheers contestant;
>I'm a hypocrite as I showed you no compassion And I lowered myself, not to your level but the level of those who think like you.
> Everyone's opinion are theirs and I have to respect that, but I necessarily don't have to agree with it.
> It's just that the intensity and the fear turning into hatred is what disturbs me the most. And that the propaganda coming from the antichrist's puppet.
Take care and have a good morning good luck.
Alx
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Author while this political stunt was just horrific I do enjoy the humour that you've managed to weave into the words, such as the tortilla fairy tale and tequila worm. And of course the drugs and weapons.
This caravan is nothing new, it's just been used as a political football which is shameful. The government should really work on a proper policy for refugee, asylum and immigration status rather than lying about it.
I wish you much luck in the booth with this gem. :)
Gloria
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Author while this political stunt was just horrific I do enjoy the humour that you've managed to weave into the words, such as the tortilla fairy tale and tequila worm. And of course the drugs and weapons.
This caravan is nothing new, it's just been used as a political football which is shameful. The government should really work on a proper policy for refugee, asylum and immigration status rather than lying about it.
I wish you much luck in the booth with this gem. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
Comment from BOO ghost
This was hilarious!
If I protected and jumped off a cliff, would others follow?
Lot of comical lines.
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When Hollywood Stars start a fashion trend, others follow.
I only require one white sheet with three holes in it.
Trick or treat. Take your treat!
BOO!
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This was hilarious!
If I protected and jumped off a cliff, would others follow?
Lot of comical lines.
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When Hollywood Stars start a fashion trend, others follow.
I only require one white sheet with three holes in it.
Trick or treat. Take your treat!
BOO!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
Comment from Michele Harber
Wow. This is a very strong (and I wish I could say unwarranted) account of what our country has become, with its cruel policies. This is a good use of the acrostic format, and I wish you luck in the contest.
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Wow. This is a very strong (and I wish I could say unwarranted) account of what our country has become, with its cruel policies. This is a good use of the acrostic format, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much sadness in these words and I suppose it can be looked at in two ways, from the comfortable America perspective and from the refugee perspective, either way there should be empathy, there is much more going on in these words than we realise, love Dolly x
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There is much sadness in these words and I suppose it can be looked at in two ways, from the comfortable America perspective and from the refugee perspective, either way there should be empathy, there is much more going on in these words than we realise, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
