Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Whoa! You rocked this form, Debi! And I love your theme! This is just the positive outlook we need today and I especially loved "Now, let's make it National, "We'll all give thanks". The rhymes were natural and not strained. Thanks for lifting our spirits!! Virtual six!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

Hi Helen, I thank you so very much. This one was tricky with the odd syllable counts. But it was a lot of fun. And it really was one of the National holidays that day. So it was fun to make it about us! Thanks for all the kind words.
And also for the pump and virtual six. That means a lot to me.
You are so sweet. Love you, Debi

reply by lyenochka on 28-Mar-2025

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I think there is a day for just about anything in the US! A day to enjoy being ourselves sounds like a delightful indulgence Debi and I enjoyed the ride here, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

Hi Dolly, I thank you so very much. This one was tricky with the odd syllable count. But it was a lot of fun.
So it was fun to make it about us, since that is what Google said one of the National Holidays were that day. Strange as that may seem.
Thanks again for all the kind words. Hugs!
Love, Debi

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I would like to make it a Debi Pick Marquette day because you are always so yourself and it amazing the number of things that you write and how will you do it I appreciate your work very much. Have a great day and may God bless you. Patricia

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025

Patricia, what a very kind hearted review. I thank you so very much for all the thoughtful words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. God bless you and yours too.
Love and hugs, Debi

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025

Patricia, what a very kind hearted review. I thank you so very much for all the thoughtful words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. God bless you and yours too.
Love and hugs, Debi

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I'm thankful for my salvation in Jesus Christ our Lord. Someone I shared the gospel to in 1971 tracked me down this week to thank me for sharing Jesus with her. She has walked with Jesus all these years. I'm so very blessed to have Jesus. There no one like Him and His love and grace. I'm thankful for Jesus and my salvation, my friend.
Sending along my very best today as always.
Love,
Sal XOs

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025

Hey sweetie, I am glad you filled in the blanks and you did it quite nicely.

Did you see the very difficult structure of this poem? It had a lot of rules and it was quite horrendous to get the meter right because of the syllable counts. I am just checking to see if anyone noticed?
Thanks a bunch, my dear friend. Debi

reply by Sally Law on 26-Mar-2025

Forgive me, I did not see the structure of the poem in the notes. I couldn't get my magnifier to work properly. I sounded good and the presentation and subject are great.. No worries here, dear one.
Love,
Sal XOs