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Brown Bear

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Comment from patcelaw
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This is a nicely written poem about a brown bear and your presentation is very lovely. It flows very well when it is read aloud. One little typo that I might notice as you say Malple tree should it not be maple. Patricia

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
    Patricia,

    Thank you for the great review. Thank you also for finding my typo.

    Cecilia
Comment from TRC
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This is a nice ode to the brown bear. You used good wording and modes of description to help the reader create a mental picture throughout the poem. Good job!
TRC

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
    TRC,

    Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you.

    Cecilia
Comment from l.raven
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HI Cecilia, I'm so sorry I'm out of sixes
my sweet friend...******...

I love a story with a happy ending....waking
up to a good breakfast...and then a restful
nap under a Maple tree...one a hot day...

I love your poem sweet girl...and love your
picture...so very well written you...love you...Linda xxoo

did you mean Maple tree???

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
    Linda,

    Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you. Yes, I did mean maple, my fingers got ahead of my brain.

    Cecilia
reply by l.raven on 09-Jan-2025
    Hi Sweet Girl, your so very welcome...
    love ya...xxoo 🤗❤️🙏🌼
Comment from Lindsey Russell
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A beautiful poem about nature and its beauty. It is very well-written. It was a joy to read. You write wonderful poetry.
Good luck with it and happy writing!

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
    Lindsey,

    Thank you for the wonderful review. I apprediate you.

    Cecilia
Comment from Begin Again
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Eat and sleep...sounds like the good life to me. Just catch you a bath while you're waiting for the fish to jump out of the water, eat it and then back to bed. Good job!
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
    Carol,

    Thank you my sweet friend for the awesome review. It sounds like the bear has a good life like you say. Eat and sleep, what more is there.

    Cecilia