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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi rconciled - interesting piece in a staccato kind of way - some I understood and some I did not. But I found it interesting. Well displayed. I actually tried to catch the bug on my screen - how do you do that LOL. Clever! Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Hi rconciled - interesting piece in a staccato kind of way - some I understood and some I did not. But I found it interesting. Well displayed. I actually tried to catch the bug on my screen - how do you do that LOL. Clever! Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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ah ...tape. some call it torture though....whatever you do dont let Bob Barker see you...-wink-...haha...photobucket...type in bugs and your half way home. love michael
Comment from rjuselius
This is an intriguing piece of poetry dear Michael! It seems to insinuate that all we do or believe in are frivolous and futile acts and world views.
Thank you for sharing this thought provoking poem!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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This is an intriguing piece of poetry dear Michael! It seems to insinuate that all we do or believe in are frivolous and futile acts and world views.
Thank you for sharing this thought provoking poem!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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ah my pleasure...used to be. appreciate you Dear. love Michael
Comment from TPAC
Wild thing. Free thought. Loose feelings. Not really targeting but strikes dispersed areas. Creative in designed structuring taking the reader into unknowns.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Wild thing. Free thought. Loose feelings. Not really targeting but strikes dispersed areas. Creative in designed structuring taking the reader into unknowns.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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wow...sounds like life to me. appreciate ya man....love michael
Comment from Joan E.
Your title certainly grabbed my attention and your animated blinking eye and creepy crawly held on to it! I admired your observations from the "treehouse". Your poem "diversifies" too, from "smells" and tastes to reactions to the "smorgasbord". Enjoy the long, holiday weekend- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Your title certainly grabbed my attention and your animated blinking eye and creepy crawly held on to it! I admired your observations from the "treehouse". Your poem "diversifies" too, from "smells" and tastes to reactions to the "smorgasbord". Enjoy the long, holiday weekend- Joan
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Hello J...-smile-
I'm glad I met you Lady. you always made me feel good about wasting time...ah haha you're great friend. love Michael
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It's never a waste of time if you smile or if you learn something--ah, the joys of FanStory and the friends we have made! Big hugs- Joan
Comment from Liberty Justice
Astonishing! Photos very
neat. Seems poet is bellowing about a myriad of events upset with like
stock market crashes, different diversities in world. Tone is one of frustration. liberty justice
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Astonishing! Photos very
neat. Seems poet is bellowing about a myriad of events upset with like
stock market crashes, different diversities in world. Tone is one of frustration. liberty justice
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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-wink-....I thank you...-smile- ...I could feel it in the tune...it came quick. appreciate you....love michael
Comment from Ricky1024
dear Michael what will be will be this treehouse of me is most certainly the enemy we live high above everybody else and look back down with suspicious eyes just sick just like the Elvis Presley song he's up there too forever and long sounds today hearts are broken my date dissipate stood me up no longer here for me I see change of direction immediately 24 out
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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dear Michael what will be will be this treehouse of me is most certainly the enemy we live high above everybody else and look back down with suspicious eyes just sick just like the Elvis Presley song he's up there too forever and long sounds today hearts are broken my date dissipate stood me up no longer here for me I see change of direction immediately 24 out
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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you got Buddy...Elvis has left the building.
fat and unhappy, tired of singing for an audience who cant hear him dying and dont give a damn anyway....-smile-...say la v...Ricky....love Michael
Comment from scd41
It is an interesting poem covering a wide canvas. It has apple pie, Disneyland, train wrecks, stock market crashes and television besides Jesus Christ. You have done a good job in putting your thoughts coherently through apparent distractions.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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It is an interesting poem covering a wide canvas. It has apple pie, Disneyland, train wrecks, stock market crashes and television besides Jesus Christ. You have done a good job in putting your thoughts coherently through apparent distractions.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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well thanks....its something that comes naturally. I was born this way....love Michael
Comment from c_lucas
We need to prepare for the unexpected. This is very well written with an interesting flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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We need to prepare for the unexpected. This is very well written with an interesting flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Amen Charlie...lock and load...-wink-....Katrina aint nothing but a walk in the park. appreciate ya Bro...love Michael
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You're welcome, Michael.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I am guessing this is about the decline of Christianity and the rise of religion. Religion makes money while Christianity makes good people. Saying and doing are two different things. Great poem even if I misunderstood. Liked the style of this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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I am guessing this is about the decline of Christianity and the rise of religion. Religion makes money while Christianity makes good people. Saying and doing are two different things. Great poem even if I misunderstood. Liked the style of this. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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its about several things all wrapped up and squeezed....you never really know whats going to come out....but you can take it to the bank. gold is a framre of mind....love Michael
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famine...famine of mine...-smile-
Comment from CT_Martin
Hey there. I thought your poem was a little off the wall & different but very well written. It didn't have the normal phrasing I normally look for but I thought it had its own quirky flow. Nice job & keep writing!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Hey there. I thought your poem was a little off the wall & different but very well written. It didn't have the normal phrasing I normally look for but I thought it had its own quirky flow. Nice job & keep writing!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Hey there...-smile-...yes I wrote it to the beat of the song. It was inspiring and I felt like sharing...we met , made love and then kissed goodnight. Thank you for enjoying...love Michael
