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Jesus is calling.

The Donald vs Uncle Joe.

36 total reviews 
Comment from nomi338
Exceptional
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As a Christian who takes Bible Scripture seriously. I do believe that you hit the nail squarely on the head by showing how scripture accurately condemns the liars, the schemers, and wrong doers who are currently enjoying their heaven right here on earth right now, but will soon suffer the damnation that is already down in writing for those ruining the earth and harming god's innocent people.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
    Nomi, thank you for the six-star review. And Amen, brother, what lousy choices we have. Terry.
reply by nomi338 on 25-Feb-2024
    Yeah, but what can you do?
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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The Donald and Uncle Joe, huh? This satire is pretty wild and goes where no man has gone before. Or rather where everyone in their right mind has gone when it comes to the upcoming election. Conspiracy theories abound but hey it is all in fun, isn't it? Satirical voting still counts. This speaks loudly and profoundly about the ability of either candidate to be president.
Thanks for the laughs and smiles!
Jesse

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
    Jesse, thank you for reading. It is fun, but sad at the same time. Terry.
reply by Jesse James Doty on 25-Feb-2024
    So true!
    Jesse
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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The tongue is the most powerful muscle in the body.
If you cannot say something well of a person; say nothing at all.
Do unto others as you would do unto thyself.
Caution: Reviewers review and comment on how the story is written and be safe by leaving politics on the sidelines.
signed: another fool.

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 Comment Written 25-Feb-2024

Comment from Bill Schott
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This story, Jesus is Calling, is a fun romp through this "If only" moment of the rubber meeting the road and the truth being squeaked out for a second in church. The Bible may come under book-burning review in Texas.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
    Bill, thank you for the stars! Texas politics can get caught up with itself sometimes. Terry.
Comment from BethShelby
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I enjoyed you parody on the Trump ane Biden match up. You worked a lot of truth into your story. It is hard to imagine what this country has come down to but if we have no other choice, I know which one I will not vote for.

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 Comment Written 25-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
    Beth, sad but true. And now what to do. Thank you for reading. Terry.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Exceptional
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Pathetic as it is, this is right out of the national news headlines. How did we end up here?

It seems the majority of Americans do not want either of these men to be president again, yet they are our choices. We only have ourselves to blame, and we will be the ones who will finally have to muster the courage to say no to these self-serving individuals that litter our political system like so much garbage on the streets.

I love that you added the Democrats scrambling to draft Brother Jim - we really are that desperate.

Terry, this is very well written, timely, humorous and sad at the same time. I enjoyed the read; of course, the fact that I'm right there with you and Brother Jim has a lot to do with it.

God help us.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
    Pam, thank you for the six-star review! This is a mess, I only wish a little sarcasm on my part would help, but sadly it will not. Terry.