Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Writer illustrates a joyous heart, pleasing realms of imaginative views, but needed aspects missed in our reality. A delightful tour with various interesting factors in its write.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. I appreciate your review.

love and light,

jeni

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Your double etheree looks and reads fabulously, Jeni. They look so much better when they are formatted they way you have yours centered.
As for the topic, our imaginations can take us places that we could never go otherwise.
But you have to have an imagination and an open mind first.
A lot of that seems to be sorely lacking here.
Well done.
So sorry I'm outta sixes. They just don't give us enough.
~Dean

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Dean, I thank you for your wonderful review. Every single word that you said regarding the topic and otherwise I find to be true!.

Love,

Jeni

reply by Dean Kuch on 20-Jan-2017

My pleasure.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Luna,

This is a rather fanciful, magical, fun piece that I enjoyed reading. *smile* My only negative comments is that, since you have decided to use punctuation, you need to use it all the way through. I have offered my suggestions below where the punctuation or capitalization seems off (to me) - you may not agree.

Notes:
1.) waiting there for you(.)

2.) (O)pen your mind;

3.) Beasts of the forest come out at night(.)

4.) Frolicking under the shining moon(.)

5.) allow your mind to follow your heart the distance to a dream.
--> LOVE! *smile*

Thanks! Enjoyed!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Dear Robyn, I don't consider them negative comments, I consider them constructive and helpful. I'm going to go into the poem after I type this and take a look. Thanks for pointing that out! Happy you liked it otherwise.

love and light,

jeni

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Ah the world of fantasy Some dark some a beautiful place with many diverse and wonderful characters a Child's banquet of imagination Well done

dip

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. I appreciate your review.

love and light,

jeni

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

One of the beautiful things about dreams is that you can be any age, any kind of life form. You can do anything, be anything, be anywhere at all. Nothing is denied to a dreamer. No wonder that all of the wonderful things we enjoy in our world today is a product of people capable of dreaming dreams of what others thought was impossible.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. I appreciate your review.

love and light,

jeni

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

What a brilliant and interesting write . A beautiful yet devastating piece painted skillfully wow this is truly incredible it is really complemented by the picture also. Well done an elegant yet emotional piece. The last two lines sum the poem up perfectly by bringing us back to the beginning,my favorite part:There is a
wonderment just
waiting there for you
open your mind; you will
be transported to the land
of magic.' Magical! Kind regards Meia :)

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Thank you so much, Meia. I'm always happy when you enjoy one of my poems. I appreciate the very kind review.

Love,


jeni

Comment from MsPetra

Excellent

You did a great job on this. I especially liked how you worked the lines into a design. Most importantly I liked the message that came across to me.
There isn't anything I would change. Please keep writing. I like your work.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. I appreciate your review.

love and light,

jeni

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written double Etheree. It s always nice to go to dreamland where we can do things we don't do normally. Where you can be like a child again.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem, Sandra. I appreciate your review.

love and light,

jeni

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Luna
What a peaceful and freckling image image you put into a child's mind and even my mind.

I like the mirror image format use used, to me put in a dancing mood

Gert

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Thanks! I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. I appreciate your review.

love and light,

jeni

Comment from winnona

Exceptional

This is a beautiful poem. The words flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. You do not know how badly I wish I could escape to this dream world.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

Dear winnona, I'm truly honored by this six-star review. I never expected to receive one for this poem. You are too kind. I'm honored.

love,

jeni