I Dream
The soothing balm of calm26 total reviews
Comment from teafor2
Un-named scribe, your rhymed title, serene walking path picture, theme of solace, show of faith tone combine with splattering of alliterations and excellent end rhymes to provide a lyrical smooth flowing soothing and peaceful entry for the contest. Good luck. teafor2
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Un-named scribe, your rhymed title, serene walking path picture, theme of solace, show of faith tone combine with splattering of alliterations and excellent end rhymes to provide a lyrical smooth flowing soothing and peaceful entry for the contest. Good luck. teafor2
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Hi teafor2, Thank you so much for your lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed! :o)
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You are welcome. teafor2
Comment from lancellot
This is a well-crafted poem for the contest. You did well in making the needed number of repetitions of your main line, not seem forced. The theme itself is one that I think will sit well with the FanStory demographic.
Good work.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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This is a well-crafted poem for the contest. You did well in making the needed number of repetitions of your main line, not seem forced. The theme itself is one that I think will sit well with the FanStory demographic.
Good work.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Hi lancelot, I so love flow in a poem! I've always loved poems that slide over your tongue. I'm thrilled you felt my poem flowed smoothly! Thank you so much for the totally awesome 6 stars. I feel incredibly honored by them! :o)
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I can enjoy your repetition poem. It's a very good poem for the challenge. You've used good imagery and vivid descriptions, as well as a good, repeated phrase. Your photo image presentation supports your words well.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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I can enjoy your repetition poem. It's a very good poem for the challenge. You've used good imagery and vivid descriptions, as well as a good, repeated phrase. Your photo image presentation supports your words well.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Hi Alexandra, repetition poems are my least favorite of all so I really tried to put my heart into it! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the lovely review and contest wishes! :o)
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I understand. You're welcome!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written repetition poem, and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. Your presentation is beautiful and I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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This is a beautifully written repetition poem, and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. Your presentation is beautiful and I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Hi Pat, thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoyed what I wrote! :o)
Comment from artisart4u
Your repetition poem is nice about how someone feels when they are outside enjoying the beauty they see all around them.
Your picture, font, and colors are nice, and good luck with your poem.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Your repetition poem is nice about how someone feels when they are outside enjoying the beauty they see all around them.
Your picture, font, and colors are nice, and good luck with your poem.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Hi Artisart, Thanks for the wonderful review! I 'm glad you enjoyed! :o)
Comment from talented150
Your poem was beautiful, and reminds us to look for the small things in life, not just the big ones. I also felt like getting out into nature so I could hear and see those sights and sounds that bring up calm feelings in us. Then in the end, when we are calm and loving, we can share our smile with others.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Your poem was beautiful, and reminds us to look for the small things in life, not just the big ones. I also felt like getting out into nature so I could hear and see those sights and sounds that bring up calm feelings in us. Then in the end, when we are calm and loving, we can share our smile with others.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Hi talented, Thank you for the lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. I am so waiting to go out and feel the soothing balm spring brings. :o)
