Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This story warmed my heart. I wish there were more Mary Ann's in the world. Wonderful job of writing. Thank you for touching my heart.

"Leland," Mrs. Hendricks said with a sigh, "this is Mrs. Lacey. She's here to see you." (This)

Mary Ann smiled, her voice warm and steady. "That's okay. I don't ne (stready,)

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 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024

Comment from patcelaw

Exceptional

This is a very beautiful and touching story and it brought A smile to my face as I was reading it you see I gave up a son for adoption, and the people who came to see him first decided that they could not take him because he was too large. So the next people that got a chance to take him were the ones who adopted him and gave him a wonderful home. Thank you for sharing. Such a lovely story on this ending of the year. Patricia.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025

Awesome as always. I know I thanked you in the PM but I wanted to make sure I said thanks again. It's awesome.
Smiles, Carol