Love's way
A poem41 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
I like your faith poem and it reminds me of baby Jesus. It is interesting and entertaining. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good job! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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I like your faith poem and it reminds me of baby Jesus. It is interesting and entertaining. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good job! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank so much Raul, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
Appreciate your poem of faith. I really like your opening of questioning about moments of despair even while being a child of God in faith. We see this in many of King David's psalms. And like those psalms, you bring us back to the joy of salvation.
One comment:
our prayer and love sustains us and leads our hearts to sing. (sustain) since both prayer and love are the subjects.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Appreciate your poem of faith. I really like your opening of questioning about moments of despair even while being a child of God in faith. We see this in many of King David's psalms. And like those psalms, you bring us back to the joy of salvation.
One comment:
our prayer and love sustains us and leads our hearts to sing. (sustain) since both prayer and love are the subjects.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank so much Helen, for these terrific comments and great review, and the great syntax observation blessings Roy
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
My mother and grandmother used the phrase, "Lord have mercy on our soul." My grandmother held a prayer meeting at our house every Sunday. And I remember them. I was only seven years old when my grandmother died. The things she preached about are coming full circle. Thank you for posting this great poem as all of the rest of your work.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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My mother and grandmother used the phrase, "Lord have mercy on our soul." My grandmother held a prayer meeting at our house every Sunday. And I remember them. I was only seven years old when my grandmother died. The things she preached about are coming full circle. Thank you for posting this great poem as all of the rest of your work.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank so much Carolyn, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
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You are welcome.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
God does not leave us, we leave Him. He is always available to guide us through life's journey. We just need to trust in His love. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem with and reminder of God's love.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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God does not leave us, we leave Him. He is always available to guide us through life's journey. We just need to trust in His love. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem with and reminder of God's love.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank Barbara, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your presentation is great, Roy. I really like the picture
and color scheme. Your words are well thought through
with good rhymes and imagery and a great message. Yes,
God's love is there for all who ask. Then, the individual can
see, feel, and understand His words better with the change
s/he makes in their lives.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Your presentation is great, Roy. I really like the picture
and color scheme. Your words are well thought through
with good rhymes and imagery and a great message. Yes,
God's love is there for all who ask. Then, the individual can
see, feel, and understand His words better with the change
s/he makes in their lives.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank Jan, for these super comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from John Ciarmello
I have become accustomed to reading your beautiful works to start my day. Always accompanied by a cup of Joe, of course. I thank you for the added boost to my day, my friend, Roy.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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I have become accustomed to reading your beautiful works to start my day. Always accompanied by a cup of Joe, of course. I thank you for the added boost to my day, my friend, Roy.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank so much John, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great rhyming, and poem flows smoothly. I like those lines in the last verse: "We will soar upon the wind as eagles on the wing.
Our prayer and love sustains us and leads our hearts to sing." What a great scripture is Psalm 30:5 - joy comes in the morning.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Great rhyming, and poem flows smoothly. I like those lines in the last verse: "We will soar upon the wind as eagles on the wing.
Our prayer and love sustains us and leads our hearts to sing." What a great scripture is Psalm 30:5 - joy comes in the morning.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thanks Anne, for these super comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
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You are welcome, Roy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Quite insightful, thoughtful. Full of hope which becomes faith if and when man puts it to the test. Sadly, the more I live the more I see G o D is becoming passe' for the throngs born recently.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Quite insightful, thoughtful. Full of hope which becomes faith if and when man puts it to the test. Sadly, the more I live the more I see G o D is becoming passe' for the throngs born recently.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thanks Tom, for these super comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
The rhyme and metre of this piece reminds me of the poems that introduced be to the concept of poetry as a child. I could almost feel my grandmother's presence in the cadence and the thoughts expressed. So much be embedded by rhyming words.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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The rhyme and metre of this piece reminds me of the poems that introduced be to the concept of poetry as a child. I could almost feel my grandmother's presence in the cadence and the thoughts expressed. So much be embedded by rhyming words.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thanks Nancy, for these super comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
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Comment from juliaSjames
This poem moved me deeply, Roy. When my husband lay dying in hospital, our grandchildren sent him handmade cards and messages every day for months until he passed. One illustrated poem from a granddaughter read
"The stars shine bright
"In the darkest night"
Thank you for sharing your talent and blessing this site with your faith
Stay safe and blessed
Hugs Cheryl
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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This poem moved me deeply, Roy. When my husband lay dying in hospital, our grandchildren sent him handmade cards and messages every day for months until he passed. One illustrated poem from a granddaughter read
"The stars shine bright
"In the darkest night"
Thank you for sharing your talent and blessing this site with your faith
Stay safe and blessed
Hugs Cheryl
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thanks Cheryl, for these super comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
