I Travel
An analogue poem for Potlatch Poetry32 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
"...and I can travel so year after year..." Such a lovely poem, Yvonne, one that inspired me to write one of my own (only I modified it slightly - added a couplet). What a place (and what a wonderful topic)!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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"...and I can travel so year after year..." Such a lovely poem, Yvonne, one that inspired me to write one of my own (only I modified it slightly - added a couplet). What a place (and what a wonderful topic)!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Dawn. I'm happy if I was an inspiration however small.
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Not small -- the poem is written!
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Thank you!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Oh yes, by the time I got to the queenly splendour I knew it would be curled up with a book. Great choice of topic Yvonne for your analogue poem,. I love the artwork, very Harry Potterish.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Oh yes, by the time I got to the queenly splendour I knew it would be curled up with a book. Great choice of topic Yvonne for your analogue poem,. I love the artwork, very Harry Potterish.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Valda. I'm so glad you like it.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Damommy. I heartily agree with your feelings in this one. Great imagery and flow. Books are what makes this life bearable some days. Great job.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, Damommy. I heartily agree with your feelings in this one. Great imagery and flow. Books are what makes this life bearable some days. Great job.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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I'm glad you feel the same way. Thank you for a great review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This analogue poem, I Travel, has a rhyme that finds itself as the poem expands. The idea of seeing the world in both present and past is made possible through the adventure of reading.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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This analogue poem, I Travel, has a rhyme that finds itself as the poem expands. The idea of seeing the world in both present and past is made possible through the adventure of reading.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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I'm glad you saw what I meant. Thank you.
Comment from Sally Law
The coziest place and so under rated! I agree with you wholeheartedly, a wondrous, magical place. I love to read.
This was well-penned and the artwork was perfect for your piece.
All my best,
Sal :+)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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The coziest place and so under rated! I agree with you wholeheartedly, a wondrous, magical place. I love to read.
This was well-penned and the artwork was perfect for your piece.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much. Much appreciated.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a beautiful, skillfully-written poem; it delivers a moving, well-deserved
tribute to BOOKS, which take us so many places and satisfy so many of our desires.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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This is a beautiful, skillfully-written poem; it delivers a moving, well-deserved
tribute to BOOKS, which take us so many places and satisfy so many of our desires.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the wonderful comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written analogue and a creative idea to travel wherever you like in your mind to let the Muse run free and help you create wonderful stories and poems for everyone to enjoy.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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A very well-written analogue and a creative idea to travel wherever you like in your mind to let the Muse run free and help you create wonderful stories and poems for everyone to enjoy.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you. I'm gad you like it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
And this is the world that so many youth these days have never been .... and they are simply not encouraged from any angle to go there .... I can't imagine my life without my fantasy escape!! :) :) Thank you for sharing this lovely 'rhyming couplet compendium' with us all! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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And this is the world that so many youth these days have never been .... and they are simply not encouraged from any angle to go there .... I can't imagine my life without my fantasy escape!! :) :) Thank you for sharing this lovely 'rhyming couplet compendium' with us all! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you for reviewing. I agree. Young people don't seem to have the same love of books we do.
Comment from kiwijenny
Books should be shaped like jets or time machines or treasure boxes they transport to wonderful worlds beyond us.
Such a good poem
Well penned
God bless
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Books should be shaped like jets or time machines or treasure boxes they transport to wonderful worlds beyond us.
Such a good poem
Well penned
God bless
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Good idea. Never thought of it that way. Thank you so much.
Comment from Heather Knight
I totally agree with what you say here, Yvonne. Books are the most wonderful object in the world. They can take us to different places and introduce to all kinds of people.
I love everything you write and this is no exception.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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I totally agree with what you say here, Yvonne. Books are the most wonderful object in the world. They can take us to different places and introduce to all kinds of people.
I love everything you write and this is no exception.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Awww, thank you, Maria. I appreciate your comments and your support.
