Comment from royowen

Exceptional

Your poems are definitely story based Pam, that's probably why they're so long, the tale's finished with such ease. You're so gifted my friend, not a common gift, but you're so good at this. Effortless meter, rhyme and story, beautful language, you seem to do it with ease. Well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

Wow Roy. Thank you so much. Each one takes three to five hours. It does come naturally to write a story. But I don?t need to tell you that paying attention to meter takes time. Sometimes one line takes an hour. Thank you also for your awesome review

reply by royowen on 21-Jul-2018

Always a pleasure

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I love fantasy dreamy poems, they are uplifting, warm and take the reader on a journey away from reality, yours is no exception, a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

Thank you Dolly for your delightful review

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Well that sure is an epic fantasy. I I think i'll have what your'e on. ( is that just an English saying?) Lots of good imagery and clever thyme.
I think you needto take rest after that one. Love Jen.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

Lol. Jen. I am a very cerebral person and my mind seldom rests. I had two sleep stodies and never had REM sleep either time. But then I have sever sleep apnea. Hah. Too mych onfirmatiin, eh? I also play chess and paint which takes lots of planning. My sleep suffers. It might be a curse except I am disabled so I can?t do physical activities. So I am still happy because my favorite activities are cerebral. Thank you for your awesome review. It made me smile

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a fantasy fun tale of a little tiniest girl living in a field of clover, it was a place for your momma's crystal vase, romantic feeling ends like a dream; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

Thank you Alcreator for your wonderful review

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

you really have you cadence and pace down to a science, Pam. this is really a cute story of a miniature soccer game with great rhymes...............meeshu

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

Thank you meeshu for a nice review? Are you gonna post tonight or morning depending on where you live?

reply by meeshu on 21-Jul-2018

I have a half dozen, have to decide--fun, dire, sad, philosophical??

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

I don?t have anymore. Have to write new ones

reply by meeshu on 21-Jul-2018

I love your new ones.

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

Thank you