The Night Garden
Careful where you tread!15 total reviews
Comment from Curt Winslow
A very whimsical tale and humorous. You did a great job of making the dawrves come to life once again. It reminds me of the garden gnomes people have around their homes.
reply by the author on 21-May-2013
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A very whimsical tale and humorous. You did a great job of making the dawrves come to life once again. It reminds me of the garden gnomes people have around their homes.
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 21-May-2013
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G'day Curt, Glad you got a smile; too much doom and gloom poetry around. I am a wheelchair gardener and the gnomes bring some colour to our winter landscape. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from adewpearl
how adorable your picture is :-)
good alliteration in Sleepy slept soundly
and in day was done/doused
and in Sleepy stretched/scratched
I love your verb choices
more good alliteration
I do think you're right about these fellas having far too much life in them to be plaster statues :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 21-May-2013
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how adorable your picture is :-)
good alliteration in Sleepy slept soundly
and in day was done/doused
and in Sleepy stretched/scratched
I love your verb choices
more good alliteration
I do think you're right about these fellas having far too much life in them to be plaster statues :-) Brooke
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 21-May-2013
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Hello Brooke, Thanks for reading and reviewing - I wanted to make people smile because there is too much sadness in the world and the poems presented are doom and gloom. I am sick of "Oh, woe is me," poems (your good self excluded) LOL. Kay XX
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Yep, too much woeing going on for my taste.
LOL The real world has enough woe in it. Today's news about the tornadoes is a case in point. I want woe, all I have to do is turn on the news, or look in my mailbox for bills! LOL
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Yep, Been watching the devastation on TV. Our electricity has gone up 20% - the pensioners are getting pushed around too much. Bloody cold here - winter in Oz. XX
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I love how prices keep rising way way higher than any income increases we receive - every year it's just a bit worse than the year before...
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Indeed, used to call Oz the lucky country; too many imports real and imagined. Big problem with boat people - Govt. can make up it's mind about anything - some want gay marriage passed - I don't - not in our churches please!!
Comment from 4tun81
Alliteration always amuses!
Sleepy slept soundly
Pulling out plants; pesky weeds prospered
Plaster dwarfs they are not
This is wonderfully cute and I love the alliteration. Thanks for posting. Great job.
reply by the author on 21-May-2013
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Alliteration always amuses!
Sleepy slept soundly
Pulling out plants; pesky weeds prospered
Plaster dwarfs they are not
This is wonderfully cute and I love the alliteration. Thanks for posting. Great job.
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 21-May-2013
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G'day from Dwarfville in Oz! Being a wheelchair gardener I wanted some colour to help our winter landscape - we don't have snow here. Glad you enjoyed. Cheers from Aussie.
Comment from Taffspride
I chuckled at this cute poem, now I know what happens in the garden when we snuggle up in our beds.
It is a nice thought, those little gnomes getting on with gardening chores while we sleep.
Great poem, thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
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reply by the author on 21-May-2013
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I chuckled at this cute poem, now I know what happens in the garden when we snuggle up in our beds.
It is a nice thought, those little gnomes getting on with gardening chores while we sleep.
Great poem, thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
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Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 21-May-2013
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Good! Glad it made you chuckle; too much sadness around today. I am collecting the little fellows to jolly up my winter garden - often hear noises in the wee small hours...have got a large senior gnome called Norman and he is the overseer of pulling out plants! LOL XXX Kay.
Comment from Gungalo
Pulling out plants; pesky weeds prospered
Plaster dwarfs they are not
Beginning sneaky work at ten O'clock
Keep your door closed - handy the hose!
Oh lord, all seven. You'll be having dwarfs sleeping in every tree. What a fun time reading this one girl.
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Pulling out plants; pesky weeds prospered
Plaster dwarfs they are not
Beginning sneaky work at ten O'clock
Keep your door closed - handy the hose!
Oh lord, all seven. You'll be having dwarfs sleeping in every tree. What a fun time reading this one girl.
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Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 21-May-2013
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Hey, Where ya been? Missed ya. Haven't got the seven yet - still collecting. They cheer me up with color; tis winter here. Cheers, K.
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Hi missed ya too.
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Sigh...ain't love grand?
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Smilesssssssssssssssssssssss.
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Can't at the moment - too much pain. Will try in summer when my blood warms up again.
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Smile.
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Are your teeth like stars? They come out at night? LOL.
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No are yours? LOL
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So long ago since I wrote to you - can't remember what are mine? LOL. Senile dementia has crept up and grabbed me by the short and curly's. LOL
