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The ultimate love15 total reviews
Comment from Righteous Riter
The message is clear in this. The words bring the photo to life. The structure of this piece is good. The rhyming is good. This piece flows well as the harmony is where it needs to be. My attention is captured from the beginning and held to the end. Good job.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
The message is clear in this. The words bring the photo to life. The structure of this piece is good. The rhyming is good. This piece flows well as the harmony is where it needs to be. My attention is captured from the beginning and held to the end. Good job.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your very kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from leann213
your picture doesn't only go with your poem but you can tell it all has meaning to it well said great work to me you deid a great job
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
your picture doesn't only go with your poem but you can tell it all has meaning to it well said great work to me you deid a great job
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Ultimately sang, love recognised, angelic following shades and shadows, now in colour light, right note, colourful voice, this love recognition poem has good flow of thoughts and beautiful images but there is dearth of visual.
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
Ultimately sang, love recognised, angelic following shades and shadows, now in colour light, right note, colourful voice, this love recognition poem has good flow of thoughts and beautiful images but there is dearth of visual.
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your review and your note that it is lacking visual. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from visionary1234
This one sounds more like a song then a poem - I can hear it hummed complete with background harmony - sweet love "song" write here! Simple and delightful! :)S
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
This one sounds more like a song then a poem - I can hear it hummed complete with background harmony - sweet love "song" write here! Simple and delightful! :)S
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your stopping by.
Comment from Annie James
A beautiful poem with a lovely lilting rhythm.
Love celebrated is always a positive experience.
I can't think of any critical comment (what else to write when this is the case!).
Well done.
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
A beautiful poem with a lovely lilting rhythm.
Love celebrated is always a positive experience.
I can't think of any critical comment (what else to write when this is the case!).
Well done.
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you, Annie, for your very kind words.