Cicada Watch
a Monorhyme poem15 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent monrhyme poem with much good imagery and good flowing rhymes. I enjoyed reading this and viewing you'd supportive photo image. Best wishes.
Alex
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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This is an excellent monrhyme poem with much good imagery and good flowing rhymes. I enjoyed reading this and viewing you'd supportive photo image. Best wishes.
Alex
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much, Alex, for your kind words.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Monorhyme writing prompt. I wish I had a six left for this poem. It was beautifully written with such a smooth flow and the rhymes were perfect within the story of the cicada. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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An excellent entry for the Monorhyme writing prompt. I wish I had a six left for this poem. It was beautifully written with such a smooth flow and the rhymes were perfect within the story of the cicada. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much, Marilyn. That virtual six is much appreciated.
Comment from Noreen Bernardo
You did a fine job with this monorhyme. It has an easy flow that parallels with the story. It's an interesting topic as well. I find it fascinating how most of their lives are spent burrowed under ground. We get them here in Michigan. Fortunately for just a brief time. Best wishes to you!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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You did a fine job with this monorhyme. It has an easy flow that parallels with the story. It's an interesting topic as well. I find it fascinating how most of their lives are spent burrowed under ground. We get them here in Michigan. Fortunately for just a brief time. Best wishes to you!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Noreen. We were inundated last year and could be again this year.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes, I have heard that birds wait in anticipation of these cicadas so that they can have a good feast. I enjoyed your rhymes and flow and adored the sentiments mere, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Yes, I have heard that birds wait in anticipation of these cicadas so that they can have a good feast. I enjoyed your rhymes and flow and adored the sentiments mere, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Yes, Dolly, the birds love them. I’m delighted you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from rspoet
Hello poet,
Your Mono-rhyme reads smoothly with excellent meter
and varied mono-rhymes. Not an easy task as these poems are often forced.
The topic of nature and description of the cicada is well done
and the last line brings a smile.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Hello poet,
Your Mono-rhyme reads smoothly with excellent meter
and varied mono-rhymes. Not an easy task as these poems are often forced.
The topic of nature and description of the cicada is well done
and the last line brings a smile.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much, Robert, for your kind praise of my monorhyme.
