Snitch Leads to Getting Hitched
Trouble starts with restaurant snitch.27 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I remember how your future brother-in-law snitched on you about being with all those guys in the restaurant. I guess Evan was sure you were going to break up with him and you surprised him with the marriage proposal which changed the world for him! I was chuckling all through your retelling.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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I remember how your future brother-in-law snitched on you about being with all those guys in the restaurant. I guess Evan was sure you were going to break up with him and you surprised him with the marriage proposal which changed the world for him! I was chuckling all through your retelling.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you Helen for the review. I started passing out Friday and had to go to the emergency room and have a pacemaker put in I just got it this morning so I'll probably be off fans for a while. Beth
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Oh, I'm shocked to hear this. You'll be in my prayers, Beth. But I'll also be off Fanstory for about three weeks or so. Hugs and prayers!
Comment from Wendy G
Rhomus should not have interfered, especially since you had explained the situation. A pity Evan turned cold but maybe he was not used to confrontation and didn't want to run the risk of losing you. At least you had the courage to take matters into your own hands to win him back! Well written.
Wendy
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Rhomus should not have interfered, especially since you had explained the situation. A pity Evan turned cold but maybe he was not used to confrontation and didn't want to run the risk of losing you. At least you had the courage to take matters into your own hands to win him back! Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
I had a college "romance" if you could call it that, that went a little like your diner experience, but when I met my wife, I proposed early on and, thank God, there were no petty divisions. Thanks for sharing this look into your personal history.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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I had a college "romance" if you could call it that, that went a little like your diner experience, but when I met my wife, I proposed early on and, thank God, there were no petty divisions. Thanks for sharing this look into your personal history.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you Jim, I always appreciate your reviews. I had to get a pacemaker put in this morning because I started passing out Friday or maybe late Facebook posting anything else for a while. Beth Beth
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Please take care of your health. Your voice is important to me and all of FanStory.
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Thank you Jim. Appreciate the review and also the concern for my health I'm feeling some better today. I'm staying with my daughter after having the pacemaker put in. Beth
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May God bless you richly. You're fortunate to have a caring family.
Comment from CM Kelly
A nice read, with a good set up in the beginning and a solid close at the end. I'm not much of a "reviewer", I just know when I like something. One small comment, the last sentence, I think is awkward, "... I had back the guy that ...", to me it doesn't seem right?
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A nice read, with a good set up in the beginning and a solid close at the end. I'm not much of a "reviewer", I just know when I like something. One small comment, the last sentence, I think is awkward, "... I had back the guy that ...", to me it doesn't seem right?
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm glad your relationship worked out the way it was supposed to. I enjoyed reading. Another good write.
"Then, how about this weekend?" He was testing me. (He tested me. This is stronger.)
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I'm glad your relationship worked out the way it was supposed to. I enjoyed reading. Another good write.
"Then, how about this weekend?" He was testing me. (He tested me. This is stronger.)
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This was a fun read, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also wish you a wonderful day. May you have a most blessed new year and may God grant you your fondest wishes. Patricia
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This was a fun read, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also wish you a wonderful day. May you have a most blessed new year and may God grant you your fondest wishes. Patricia
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
Comment from zanya
Wow! now this is a real treat to read of budding and declared true love between two young people and their sincerity and candour in expressing it - thanks for sharing this personal tale.
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Wow! now this is a real treat to read of budding and declared true love between two young people and their sincerity and candour in expressing it - thanks for sharing this personal tale.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
Comment from Begin Again
I give you six stars for the happy ending, but more so, for the strong woman you were to take the bull by the horns and go after what you really wanted. You took the chance to set things straight and that took a lot of courage. Bravo! I am thrilled that it all worked out the way it was meant to be.
Smiles, Carol
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I give you six stars for the happy ending, but more so, for the strong woman you were to take the bull by the horns and go after what you really wanted. You took the chance to set things straight and that took a lot of courage. Bravo! I am thrilled that it all worked out the way it was meant to be.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Beth. I am enjoying your story and how you flow from one important point to another in a seamless manner. Good writing. This one melted my heart with the sincere way in which you presented the emotional upheaval that your characters had to endure. Well written!
Meliss
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Hello Beth. I am enjoying your story and how you flow from one important point to another in a seamless manner. Good writing. This one melted my heart with the sincere way in which you presented the emotional upheaval that your characters had to endure. Well written!
Meliss
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Lovely, Beth! Not too sentimental. Just a perfect blend of romance and the taming of a young woman who finally realised how much she stood to lose. Your self-confidence which had grown throughout this book came to the fore and you were determined not to let any misunderstanding come between you. Evan too had proved his commitment and love. Warmest wishes, Debbie
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Lovely, Beth! Not too sentimental. Just a perfect blend of romance and the taming of a young woman who finally realised how much she stood to lose. Your self-confidence which had grown throughout this book came to the fore and you were determined not to let any misunderstanding come between you. Evan too had proved his commitment and love. Warmest wishes, Debbie
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
