Reminiscing
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "A New Hamster?"A collection of short stories
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, it's a delightful little story and the fight to get to a hamster or two. But Andrew wins the day. No hamster is entering the house.
In various places you need to add a 'the'. All best, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Hi Barbara, it's a delightful little story and the fight to get to a hamster or two. But Andrew wins the day. No hamster is entering the house.
In various places you need to add a 'the'. All best, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I never edit these as much as I do my novels. I'll go back and reread. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
Actually I agree with you, I think it's a mistake not owning pets when kids are young, they won't be acquainted with that level of love at an early age, we are terribly influenced by our environment when young. Ive always loved animals from childhood, they are great companions, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Actually I agree with you, I think it's a mistake not owning pets when kids are young, they won't be acquainted with that level of love at an early age, we are terribly influenced by our environment when young. Ive always loved animals from childhood, they are great companions, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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They do have a cat, LC, and just two weeks ago, lost a cat, Max, to old age. Thank you for the kind review.
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That's good, nothing like a dog though, we owned scores of both.
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They had a dog. Well, Katie had a dog before her and Andrew ever met. Wyatt died when Eleanor was a baby.
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OH, I didn't know that.
Comment from Begin Again
the girls are adorable and I do remember those days when they wouldn't stop talking until they wore me down.... I was working two jobs and pregnant... We got a hamster...which got out and was later found inside the register... good thing the heat wasn't on.
Smiles, Carol
," said Elleanor.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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the girls are adorable and I do remember those days when they wouldn't stop talking until they wore me down.... I was working two jobs and pregnant... We got a hamster...which got out and was later found inside the register... good thing the heat wasn't on.
Smiles, Carol
," said Elleanor.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome. It was a fun story!