Birthdays
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Comment from Eternal Muse
This is such a nice paean to the fellow poet.and member of our writing community.
He sounds like a great guy and great writer. I haven't had the privilege to be very familiar with his works, but I will definitely look into his portfolio.
Loved your rhyming and imagery. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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This is such a nice paean to the fellow poet.and member of our writing community.
He sounds like a great guy and great writer. I haven't had the privilege to be very familiar with his works, but I will definitely look into his portfolio.
Loved your rhyming and imagery. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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Hi E M 'I appreciate all your kind words for John and his poem. Thanks so much my sweet friend!
Comment from Ben Colder
Good tribute to John. I enjoy reading his material also. I did not know he was having a birthday, but I wish him the best. You did well with this. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Good tribute to John. I enjoy reading his material also. I did not know he was having a birthday, but I wish him the best. You did well with this. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Hi Ben! 'I appreciate all your kind words for John and his poem. Thanks so much my sweet friend!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A very well-written and happy birthday card to one of my favorite guys: John Ciarmello.
I think these words particularly capture John:
"One of a kind, a man with heart
'You're top ranked on a "Most Loved" chart."
Thank you for thinking of him.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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A very well-written and happy birthday card to one of my favorite guys: John Ciarmello.
I think these words particularly capture John:
"One of a kind, a man with heart
'You're top ranked on a "Most Loved" chart."
Thank you for thinking of him.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Thanks Mary! I appreciate all your kind words for John and his poem. Thanks so much my sweet friend! The never forget your birthday since it is the day before mine., Thanks lamps again my fellow Libra!
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I have mine written for you;
Roses are red; violet are blue.
Debi has a birthday too!
This is the extent of my poetry talent.
Take care
Mary
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Hahaha! Just seeing my name in a poem makes me smile, silly as it is. Thanks for the smile.
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
That was a very thoughtful and considerate poem. I hope John's birthday went well for him and also that he has a very good upcoming Father's Day. Hope the neck injury wasn't too serious. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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That was a very thoughtful and considerate poem. I hope John's birthday went well for him and also that he has a very good upcoming Father's Day. Hope the neck injury wasn't too serious. Nicely written.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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I appreciate all your kind words for John and his poem. Thanks so much my dear friend!
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent birthday poem for John and I join you in sending greetings to him for his special day. I also hope he recovers quickly from his injury to his neck. Thanks for sharing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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An excellent birthday poem for John and I join you in sending greetings to him for his special day. I also hope he recovers quickly from his injury to his neck. Thanks for sharing.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Hi again Wendy.
I appreciate all your kind words for John and his poem. Thanks so much my sweet friend!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written birthday poem for John. I am so sorry about his neck. It is not fun when you have pain in your neck or head. I hope he has a really blessed birthday! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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This is a very beautiful and well written birthday poem for John. I am so sorry about his neck. It is not fun when you have pain in your neck or head. I hope he has a really blessed birthday! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Hi Teri, I appreciate all your kind words for John and his poem. Thanks so much my sweet friend!
Comment from jmdg1954
Hah. You done did it again, Debi. What a nice poem backed with your flow of words, rhymes.
I'm sure JohnC is happy to have received this poem in his honor
Well done.
OBTW...how was the surgery? I hope off went well.
John
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Hah. You done did it again, Debi. What a nice poem backed with your flow of words, rhymes.
I'm sure JohnC is happy to have received this poem in his honor
Well done.
OBTW...how was the surgery? I hope off went well.
John
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Hi John, I appreciate all your kind words for John and his poem. Thanks so much my sweet friend! Surgery went well and am looking forward to the next one..... Y know I plan on doing that grandpa's poem for father's day
And just wondering what you think your best quality is w your grands Or what makes them love you the most?
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Hey. I?m glad the surgery went well!!!
Hmph?I?m going to see my four grandkids from Florida, next week when they fly up here. Next weekend, for the first time in 5yrs we?ll have our entire fsmily together in our house,.. our .3 kids and 5 grands? woo hoo!
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Awesome news john!
So happy for you!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, I love this poem, and what I love the most is when I find other members from the NY/NJ area, both places close to my heart.
Your poem reads and flows well, and you've illustrated the essence of John. Of special note:
'You're top ranked on a "Most Loved" chart
You're right up there with Amazon
(D, the lines above are so very cute.)
Great rhyming. Well-chosen photo. A pleasure to read, and you are our amazing Debi--writing and posting just a few days after eye surgery.
Well done, but please take care of your health. Xo. M
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Hi Debi, I love this poem, and what I love the most is when I find other members from the NY/NJ area, both places close to my heart.
Your poem reads and flows well, and you've illustrated the essence of John. Of special note:
'You're top ranked on a "Most Loved" chart
You're right up there with Amazon
(D, the lines above are so very cute.)
Great rhyming. Well-chosen photo. A pleasure to read, and you are our amazing Debi--writing and posting just a few days after eye surgery.
Well done, but please take care of your health. Xo. M
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Hey Margaret, I could use your assistance if you don't mind. After doing the grandma poem a few months ago, I have been asked to do a grandpa poem and I thought the best time to do one should be Father's Day. I am trying to get a feel for what it is that makes some men a good grandpa. What do your grandkids call Steve and what do you think makes him a good grandpa? I really appreciate it if you could help me with that. Thanks so much for this kind review for John too my dear friend. I love that you liked the Amazon remark. You are the first one who said anything. Thanks Sweetie!
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The kids call Steve Poppy.
Steve loves to play with the kids, and he has introduced the to the love of music with his guitar and keyboard. Also, when they were little and crying, he would sooth them by carrying them around the house and tell them stories about the room that they were in--stuff like that. Xo. M
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Debi,
Another good birthday poem. I am sorry to here his neck is injured. Hope it gets well soon. There are several Johns on this site. Which John is it, what is his site name.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Hi Debi,
Another good birthday poem. I am sorry to here his neck is injured. Hope it gets well soon. There are several Johns on this site. Which John is it, what is his site name.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend
Joan
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Hi Joan, if you look right above the title it will say in description box, for John Ciarmello. Lol, I thought that might be the easiest for people to see.
Thanks Hon for the very kind words for his poem. As always it is so appreciated my sweet friend.
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Sorry. Debi. I am blind.
You?re most kindly welcome.
Joan
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Joan,
I did not know that! I thought I knew you so well so was joking around w you , but I'm so sorry for you.
Please know I am always here for you w prayers and much love!
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No need to apologize. It was hyperbole.
I have bad eyesight. But with glasses I see fine. I just missed something right in front of me.
Joan
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your birthday poem for John was well done, Debi.
I enjoyed reading it. You highlighted the many
admirable traits of his with smooth flow and great
rhymes. Your poem read like a mini biography. The
flow was smooth with unforced rhymes. You gave
readers great info about him. Your last verse was a
great tribute to John. I didn't know why I hadn't seen
his work lately. Yes, he is one of a kind--as you are.
Thanks for sharing and caring, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Your birthday poem for John was well done, Debi.
I enjoyed reading it. You highlighted the many
admirable traits of his with smooth flow and great
rhymes. Your poem read like a mini biography. The
flow was smooth with unforced rhymes. You gave
readers great info about him. Your last verse was a
great tribute to John. I didn't know why I hadn't seen
his work lately. Yes, he is one of a kind--as you are.
Thanks for sharing and caring, Jan
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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As always, you are the best reviewer in the whole World. Thanks for such kind comments and for being so-specific and sweet. And Thanks for the six stars, my dear friend.
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