One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like this poem- interesting story about your childhood memories- in free style- good presentation-
Mediterranean is a beautiful sea / region also have many memories- Old Spice- that takes me back!! Good job!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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I like this poem- interesting story about your childhood memories- in free style- good presentation-
Mediterranean is a beautiful sea / region also have many memories- Old Spice- that takes me back!! Good job!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, ap, for your time and kind review, I appreciate it.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a superb free verse poem. So true, that where we were young does indeed still play out in our imaginations where it occurred.
I think your presentation is playful and takes right back to your place of birth -- the Mediterranean.
Very well done and a pleasure to read and review. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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This is a superb free verse poem. So true, that where we were young does indeed still play out in our imaginations where it occurred.
I think your presentation is playful and takes right back to your place of birth -- the Mediterranean.
Very well done and a pleasure to read and review. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Gloria, thank you very much for your time and kind review, I appreciate it.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from juliaSjames
Love this, Gypsy. It's such a windblown, go with the flow, kind of poem. Playful even, although, like life, it has its serious, sad elements. The sensory, concrete imagery draws the reader into the depths of the write. I say again I love this.
Stay safe and blessed, Julia
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Love this, Gypsy. It's such a windblown, go with the flow, kind of poem. Playful even, although, like life, it has its serious, sad elements. The sensory, concrete imagery draws the reader into the depths of the write. I say again I love this.
Stay safe and blessed, Julia
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading my free verse. I'm happy you like it. It comes from my heart.
Gypsy hugs and blessings
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Beautiful
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
As always, your poetry speaks to us in its words, form, shape, colors, and picture. Your poems are never just about the words on the page, but the whole of everything that we see.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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As always, your poetry speaks to us in its words, form, shape, colors, and picture. Your poems are never just about the words on the page, but the whole of everything that we see.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Pam, thank you very much for the lovely reviewand kind words. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
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Pam, thank you very much for the lovely reviewand kind words. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I remember you said you hailed from Spain, and like my home nation is still part of me, you will never lose that attachment to you place of birth. This is beautifully written dear Gypsy, great post, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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I remember you said you hailed from Spain, and like my home nation is still part of me, you will never lose that attachment to you place of birth. This is beautifully written dear Gypsy, great post, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Roy. Yes, I will always carry Spain and the Mediterranean in my heart.
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Comment from lyenochka
Love your free verse and it is free also in its formatting, too! I like the theme of how the Mediterranean Sea has been part of you from birth and the memories still grow with you!
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Love your free verse and it is free also in its formatting, too! I like the theme of how the Mediterranean Sea has been part of you from birth and the memories still grow with you!
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Yes, you got it. It's always that will ever be part of me. I've been watching a Spanish show on tv and maybe that is what prompted this poem. Who knows? I never question my muse.
Helen, thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem :)
Gypsy hugs