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Elizabeth Emerald
I peg this as a winner. Stunning! Poignant sentiments eloquently expressed, spot-on for the circumstances.
she's going to have a hard time for [awhile=>a while]. (awhile=for a while)
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
Thank you for the kind review and comments. I'll go check the grammar, thanks for catching that. I know that you are an editor, and I appreciate your input.
reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 05-Dec-2021
Be assured: my editor cites errors in my work!