In the Corridors of Your Mind
The sinister lurks In the shadowy dark26 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent, expressive use of your fifteen syllables in this creatively composed poem that starts out with hair-raising terror and ends with the gentle cure for these nighttime horrors. Hugs are powerful!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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You have made excellent, expressive use of your fifteen syllables in this creatively composed poem that starts out with hair-raising terror and ends with the gentle cure for these nighttime horrors. Hugs are powerful!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thanks Janice.
It was fun to set this particular poem up and I am thrilled you enjoyed it. have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A great presentation for your 15 syllable poem about frightening nightmares that thankfully ends with a hug. Yes, I too was a child that had colourful frightening nightmares that ended with a hug from mum. Great job.
Cheers
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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A great presentation for your 15 syllable poem about frightening nightmares that thankfully ends with a hug. Yes, I too was a child that had colourful frightening nightmares that ended with a hug from mum. Great job.
Cheers
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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thank you so much for enjoying my poem and the presentation. Have a great day, Pearl.
smiles, CArol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I'm sure this is what is meant when the rules state, creative approaches welcomed. Your poem is a description of my childhood dreams, because they always ended with hugs. I love the entire, very effective presentation, especially the placement of the words "falling," and "clawing," along with the photo,
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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I'm sure this is what is meant when the rules state, creative approaches welcomed. Your poem is a description of my childhood dreams, because they always ended with hugs. I love the entire, very effective presentation, especially the placement of the words "falling," and "clawing," along with the photo,
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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I had falling dreams all the time but unfortunately I didn't experience the hugs... until much later in life. Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles to you as always, Carol
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
In the Corridors of Your Mind
by Begin Again
Interesting poem. I live the picture but the words are hard to read.
I counted your syllables, you have 15 as the contest required.
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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In the Corridors of Your Mind
by Begin Again
Interesting poem. I live the picture but the words are hard to read.
I counted your syllables, you have 15 as the contest required.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Sorry you had a difficult time reading the presentation. Appreciate your review. Smiles, Carol
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You're welcome, Carol :)
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It's okay. You're welcome, Carol :)
Comment from BethShelby
Nicely written in so few syllables. It present a full picture of a nightmare and being awakened by someone who cares enough to hug and quite your racing heart.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Nicely written in so few syllables. It present a full picture of a nightmare and being awakened by someone who cares enough to hug and quite your racing heart.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Glad you enjoyed it, Beth. one or two said it was hard to read because of the set up, but I felt it helped express the emotions. Glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
I think all these things can cause or be the result of nightmares. It looks like a wonderful work of with the right colour grey to dominate the background, excellent entry in this contest, well done, good luck Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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I think all these things can cause or be the result of nightmares. It looks like a wonderful work of with the right colour grey to dominate the background, excellent entry in this contest, well done, good luck Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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I had all these things as a child except the hugs... I faced it alone but then I was blessed to receive the love and protection of my honey and I forgot about a lot of the past. Smiles, Carol
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That?s wonderful Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
BRILLIANT! Carol, perfect syllable count and amazing wording. It all adds up to a splendid horror story which we all have now and again lurking in the dark recesses of our mind. I think your presentation is amazing, and I'm sure this will do really well in the contest. Well done, and good luck!! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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BRILLIANT! Carol, perfect syllable count and amazing wording. It all adds up to a splendid horror story which we all have now and again lurking in the dark recesses of our mind. I think your presentation is amazing, and I'm sure this will do really well in the contest. Well done, and good luck!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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thank you for everything.... I remember these terrible nightmares when I was younger minus the hugs...No one was there to comfort me....but I was more than blessed in later years. have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
What a dramatic poem! You made the formatting promote the action of your words. Do you still have "falling" dreams? Falling dreams was said to indicate growth spurts. But having a hug to quell nightmares is the best solution! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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What a dramatic poem! You made the formatting promote the action of your words. Do you still have "falling" dreams? Falling dreams was said to indicate growth spurts. But having a hug to quell nightmares is the best solution! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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I don't anymore but I had lots of them when I was younger...minus the hugs unfortunately. My hugger was when God gave me Michael and that was the best.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
Neat presentation. The use of the form an the space is great. In this case form follows feeling. I made me smile. The feeling ans description reing true to the subject as well.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Neat presentation. The use of the form an the space is great. In this case form follows feeling. I made me smile. The feeling ans description reing true to the subject as well.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for your kindness and the review, Nancy. I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Ingenious conception vividly rendered in this stunning presentation--frightening imagery builds the suspense and then the clever twist--very cute ending!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Ingenious conception vividly rendered in this stunning presentation--frightening imagery builds the suspense and then the clever twist--very cute ending!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Glad you enjoyed it, Liz... I had lots of those nightmares when I was younger, minus the hugs unfortunately.
Smiles, Carol
