NaPoWriMo 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "15. Colour"NaPoWriMo 2021 Poetry Challenge
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Comment from royowen
I watched a documentary on Australia's past history, which Elaine and I enjoyed immensely, and to our great delight had managed to add realistic colour, which added to the appeal, beautifully written Debra, clever use of colour, (must have taken some effort.) loved this novel post. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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I watched a documentary on Australia's past history, which Elaine and I enjoyed immensely, and to our great delight had managed to add realistic colour, which added to the appeal, beautifully written Debra, clever use of colour, (must have taken some effort.) loved this novel post. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Roy :) I appreciate your feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra
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A pleasure
Comment from Anne Johnston
I love your poem and you are so right. Our world would be a bleak one without colour (here in Canada we spell it that way too). I am so glad that God pulled out his most vivid colours when He created our wonderful world.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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I love your poem and you are so right. Our world would be a bleak one without colour (here in Canada we spell it that way too). I am so glad that God pulled out his most vivid colours when He created our wonderful world.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Anne :) Best wishes, Debra
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You are welcome
Comment from Sharon Davis
Your rhyming poem is brilliantly presented with the changing font colours, used in conjuction with the colours most often associated with the particular elements of nature that are referenced. Great job!
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Your rhyming poem is brilliantly presented with the changing font colours, used in conjuction with the colours most often associated with the particular elements of nature that are referenced. Great job!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Sharon, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Susan Newell
I wish I had a six for this one. I generally don't like a lot of color in poetry, but in this case it is completely merited and it must have taken you forever to get all the colors right. Delightful reae!
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I wish I had a six for this one. I generally don't like a lot of color in poetry, but in this case it is completely merited and it must have taken you forever to get all the colors right. Delightful reae!
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Hi Susan, Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging feedback. I really appreciate it :) Best wishes as always, Debra
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You are welcome. :-)
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Color (or Colour), presented in two AABB-rhymed, iambic pentameter quatrains, delivers the colorful statement that we certainly need the different colors or we would be a dull lot indeed. A lot of work here on coloring. Nice.
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This poem, Color (or Colour), presented in two AABB-rhymed, iambic pentameter quatrains, delivers the colorful statement that we certainly need the different colors or we would be a dull lot indeed. A lot of work here on coloring. Nice.
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Bill :) Best wishes, Debra