Love Notes
A jueju for the pen to paper club12 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
I can see your skilled hand in crafting this Japanese poem, June. Your Juju poem answers all of the forms requirements. I especially like the reference to the nightingale because I love watching birds. :)
Melissa
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I can see your skilled hand in crafting this Japanese poem, June. Your Juju poem answers all of the forms requirements. I especially like the reference to the nightingale because I love watching birds. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A beautiful romantic thought of longing as your notes proclaim. The nightingale has always been a romantic figure to have in a poem. Adding the musical asthetic to the bird and the poem is a very nice combination. thanks for sharing.
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A beautiful romantic thought of longing as your notes proclaim. The nightingale has always been a romantic figure to have in a poem. Adding the musical asthetic to the bird and the poem is a very nice combination. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
Comment from EeanBlack
Imagine teaching a bird a song only to be revealed to your true love. That would be the most romantic thing ever. This is beautiful. Thanks for the share.
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Imagine teaching a bird a song only to be revealed to your true love. That would be the most romantic thing ever. This is beautiful. Thanks for the share.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You've set the emotions well in your Jueju poem June. The missing of the one he loves and the quiet mood because the nightingale has also gone away. A poignant post that suits this style well.
Valda
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You've set the emotions well in your Jueju poem June. The missing of the one he loves and the quiet mood because the nightingale has also gone away. A poignant post that suits this style well.
Valda
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely wooden four line poem of seven and syllables each and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day a terrific evening and a fabulous week. Patricia.
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This is a nicely wooden four line poem of seven and syllables each and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day a terrific evening and a fabulous week. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
Comment from Faith Williams
What a sweet, romantic poem, June! I like the idea of the nightingale as messenger between two lovers. Another poem type I have not heard of before. I think you did a wonderful job with it.
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What a sweet, romantic poem, June! I like the idea of the nightingale as messenger between two lovers. Another poem type I have not heard of before. I think you did a wonderful job with it.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great poetry contest entry. It flows nicely and the words are very profound words. I love the nightingale song when she's around.
This is a well done poem.
Cecilia
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This is a great poetry contest entry. It flows nicely and the words are very profound words. I love the nightingale song when she's around.
This is a well done poem.
Cecilia
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
Comment from Darlene BoClair
Romantic poetry is at it's best when written out of love and longing. The words of this poem will present itself on a greeting card or gift wrapping paper. Loving this poem and it's syllable count
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Romantic poetry is at it's best when written out of love and longing. The words of this poem will present itself on a greeting card or gift wrapping paper. Loving this poem and it's syllable count
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Such a beautiful and tender poem! I love the idea of the nightingale carrying a message of the heart. I feels deeply personal. The way you share this quiet yearning is so moving. And the imagery of the bird is just perfect. It's like a little piece of nature itself is connecting your feelings to someone special. Absolutely lovely!
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Such a beautiful and tender poem! I love the idea of the nightingale carrying a message of the heart. I feels deeply personal. The way you share this quiet yearning is so moving. And the imagery of the bird is just perfect. It's like a little piece of nature itself is connecting your feelings to someone special. Absolutely lovely!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
I couldn't imagine a nightingale that had a main mission of bringing comfort to the broken hearted, and was present in both suffering souls, beautifully written June, well done, blessings Roy
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I couldn't imagine a nightingale that had a main mission of bringing comfort to the broken hearted, and was present in both suffering souls, beautifully written June, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
