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self-portrait written in repeats
A chapter in the book NaPoWriMo 2020

Self-Portrait of a Butter Lover

by sunnilicious


I wish to eat butter...
I like to eat butter,
I love to eat butter.
I want and need butter,
But I don't have butter.

I bought plant-based butter,
because of a commercial.
I hate plant-based butter;
It is naturally fake...
I can taste the difference.

The real butter is smooth...
I enjoy the richness
As cold butter melts down;
Full of fat but skinny,
And unsalted for me.

I dream about butter;
Butter balls, butter baths
Butter pats, butter sticks,
Butter knives, Butter art...
Butter my world better.


 




Day 1 Writing Prompt - Write a self-portrait with a metaphor.

This poem is about my passion for dairy with a love for pure butter. Something I was raised to know as relatable to others. I used verbs, however, not in a constant/outright action by adding the -ing to the end of those verbs.

NaPoWriMo.net provided a link to a metaphor builder. I tried it... However, I created my own metaphor through brainstorming. I utilized the word, "butter" as an action in the metaphor. They use Forrest Gump as an example to a memorable metaphor. I included the YouTube movie clip in the notes too.

Also, I went to the grocery store today and didn't see any butter in the fridge. So, I just have Country Crock Plant-based butter at home. There's so many ingredients and processed. Idk... It's not bad, It is much different than regular butter. Maybe, you should try it at least once too. Thank you for reading my poem.






REFERENCES:
1) National Poetry Writing Month, Day 1 - http://www.napowrimo.net/
2) New York Times Online, Poem: Self Portrait written by Eloisa Amezcua - https://www.nytimes.com/2018/11/01/magazine/poem-self-portrait.html
3) Blog, Pen & the Pad, How To Write A Portrait Poem written by Douglas Matus - https://penandthepad.com/write-portrait-poem-3373.html
4) Poetry Foundation Online, Article About John Ashbery, A writer of Self-Portrait in a Convex Mirror that won the Pulitzer Prize - https://www.poetryfoundation.org/articles/69257/from-the-archive-john-ashbery
5) RhymeZone, https://www.rhymezone.com/




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