Biographical Poetry posted May 9, 2016 Chapters:  ...134 135 -136- 137... 


Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
ABAB Quatrains
A chapter in the book Family

Visit to Mom

by Treischel

Who doesn't miss their mother, on a day the likes of this?
For after all, today is Mother's Day.
I felt the call to visit her. To miss her'd be remiss.
There seemed to be so very much to say.

We had a quiet visit, as she listened to my thoughts,
and it was wonderful to say "Hello."
I told her that I loved her, as my heart was tied in knots,
regretting that it didn't often show.

It seemed like only yesterday, but it's been six long years.
This place released some memories I save.
Emotions welled up reservoirs that spilled the drops of tears
upon the marble footstone of her grave.






Recognized


My wife and I visited our mother's graves on Mother's Day.

This poem is written in abab rhymed Quatrains, with a 14-10 meter.

This photograph was taken by the author himself in May 2011.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. Treischel All rights reserved.
Treischel has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.