Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted September 25, 2015 Chapters:  ...130 131 -132- 133... 


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A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy

A Giving Heart

by Treischel



You wear your heart out on your sleeve
For those who grieve
And those in need.
In hopes to impact at least one,
Perhaps some more 'fore day is done.

I wish you then Godspeed!

Small gift impacts one life, indeed.
Maybe more as days proceed.
For those who grieve,
And those who need,
May blossom from your deed.



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I was inspired to write this poem after reviewing a poem by Tab_thats me's, Saving the World. Teresa's poem was very touching.

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